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| robiNMusic |
Hello Trancelovers!
I'm Robin Alm.
20 years old.
Live in Solna, Sweden.
I've produced since late 99 with "Airforce" as my alias.
This track is unfinished and i'd like your comments on it.
Airforce - 1984 (beta)
I love original tracks who stand out a bit and in this one I've used some "non-tranceish" elements.
A funky styled "rock-guitar" and a vocal, "let's rock n roll".
Just for fun when i started this one but i think it suits the track somehowe. :tongue2
This with a driving bass and some nice perc work.
Enjoy!
Peaz/robin |
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| State of Matter |
| Holy , I LOVE this melody. This is the most original track I've heard on TA for quite some time. Fix up what you said and this will be amazing. Great work. |
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| robiNMusic |
| quote: | Originally posted by State of Matter
Holy , I LOVE this melody. This is the most original track I've heard on TA for quite some time. Fix up what you said and this will be amazing. Great work. |
Thank you for those words.
Hopefully this track will be done in the end of januari.
peaz/RRobin |
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| dbl |
i really like it with the rock guitarr... really cool...
finish it up and post it :) |
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| BassAngel |
This tune absolutely rox mate. Didn't expect anything but am very very surprised. Am burning on CD to play on friday my man. V v nice. Love the sample too.
:)
Piano is such a nice touch too, ahh yes - sweet!
EDIT: Didn't realise it finished so abruptly so will need to mix swiftly. |
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| Luke Terry |
whoa, cool !
could do with a bit more sub presence + made a bit more dj friendly, but its in cool so far
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| tylerc |
hey man. i know i've heard a ton of your stuff before but i just cant remember where. i think it was mp3.com back in the day....
anyway i'm workin on a download, but its goin pretty slow. comments asap. |
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| cybernetica |
| In parts I was reminded of Apollo 440 - Stop the Rock :D ... I like how you integrated guitars into a trance tune. Otherwise, sounds interesting, I kinda like it even though this is not my style :) ... I specially like the part starting at 3:15 and the following piano passage. And you got good mixing there, maybe a bit more subbass, but thats all I can complain about, keep it up! |
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| robiNMusic |
dbl: I'm gonna try to get more power in the guitar but it's hard to eq it with the bassline. tnx for your reply
BassAngel: Nice to hear that you are surpriced:)
Always nice to make a good first impression.
If you are going to air this on a big floor, think about the mid range of the main lead. I think it's a bit too high right now.
Let's hope the finished version won't finish so abrupt. hehe.
tnx.
Luke Terry: How would you say i could do this more "dj-friendly"?
I think that the start of the track is friendly;) hehe.
Maybe i could remove the reversed cymbal?
tnx for your reply.
Tylerc: Yes, before mp3.com wen't to hell I had a few tracks up there.
Too bad mp3.com got ed up since my plays where just starting to roll :D
Looking forward to your comments.
cybernetica: yeah, Apollo 440 was the first similar that came up in my head to. Since you are the second person reacting on the sub bass part I'll do my best to fix it.
Usually i spend hours and hours mixing & mastering.
we will see when i get the track ready for it.
tnx!
Thank's everyone! Feels good to get this feedback in a community where I'm still a nOOb :)
Peaz/Robin |
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| Jay M |
| quote: | Originally posted by robiNMusic
Thank's everyone! Feels good to get this feedback in a community where I'm still a nOOb :)
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Hi,
N00bz making good music always get a lot of comments, e.g. Vadim Zhukov was here once, not too long ago hehe. But he isn't here often, but that's the case when all your stuff gets signed. :D
This is an extremely happy track with some very nice sounds, but just too happy, and cheesy all over. Guitar is original but it reminds me too much of country music (which I HATE).
Mastering seems spot on. Nice widened in stereo as well. Only the break needs some work and I'm missing fx here and there.
So, welcome, and keep up this tight work :)
-Jay |
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| >>FK |
Quality song robiNMusic, you are very talented and I hope we see more of you in the future :)
as for critics, i suck at giving those and this is great in my ears :p |
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| caddyshack |
| def a nice track, i wonder how it would sound if the guitars were a little louder, and i think the track changes too much from the beginning to the end, what i mean is that if you listened to the beginning and the end seperatly one wouldnt think its the same song, this tune would be hard a to mix out |
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