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Sunclyder - Innocent Soul
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hey whats up,
i got your pm, so i decided to check out your track...
i liked most of it... the buildup was nice, and entering the break was nice. but after that the rest of the break soudned kinda boring. however, after the kick drops back in it starts sounding really nice again. possibly just add more effects in the break, or changing parts. overall i really like it....
check out my latest production w/ a friend at
www.haileechen.com/Hydro_-_Morning_Haze.mp3
thanks!! |
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| Sunquest |
so far upto the build it sounds great, could use more kick
overall i think this is beauty, its REALLLLL ibiza style :D i think i will play it in a set if u dont mind :)
thanks for sharing |
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| Jay M |
Woh you surely limitted/compressed the hell out of it. It does make it fatter, but quality drops like hell.
Ok. Start with a kinda weird bass. The percs at start I like. Now the kick doesn't really push through, just clear some other sounds and give it more room. The open hat is really sharp man, try to do some less q on the cut (if it's not just too loud).
The synth for the lead in the break is very dated, and it has a resonant verb, have a look at that. Structure of the whole track is ok, melody is cheesy, but effective.
Overall it ain't bad, you could some nice things going on, tho it's a bit standard. Except the fx, they are quite good!
Some work could do miracles. Keep up!
-Jay |
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| Sunclyder |
Hey!!
Thx for Your first sugestions and considerations :)
Sunquest: play my song in your set :)
Jay M.: i need master correction !!
Peace Out :)
I'm waiting for more!! |
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| NoisyNeil |
great stuff dude :) love the energy that the track seems to symbolize.
however, it starts of reall well, but then when the 'main melody' comes all the energy is gone and it sounds pretty weak.
no affence to ur production style, it's obvious that u know what ur doing. just think the melody doesn't give something extra, no climax :)
it has potential, and I think you can get a hell of a lot more out of this one! |
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| open-mind |
well i listenned to it too...
Me don't see a weird bass, i like it.
One thing I don't like: The sound used in the break for the main melody.
It sounds a little cheap...
Melody don't make me... the "thing"! You see?:)
It's good produced, but I don't keep it in mind... only because of the melo. |
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| pho mo |
Hi mate! Great club trance, the structure is fantastic with excellent builds and it really plays with your emotions.
The break is kind of cheesy, but in a club I've always loved this kind of uplifting cheese. The chord progression is really nice, I like the way it evolves over 32 bars.
There are some really nice touches you've put in, some infrequent little bright arpeggios, lots of bass kick drop outs that go really well with the big chord melody, and some nice percussion
I agree with Jay M that this track is compressed to all hell, makes it immediately appealing but could get a bit tiresome after a while.
The mixing is great, only problem is there is a bit of clipping around 3:29, not sure if thats in the reverb kick sample or not.
Nice tune!! |
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| kozbiol |
great tune m8! i really enjoyed that - song has excellent atmosphere.
im agree with NoisyNeil - the main melody needs a bit more energy
Gratuluje - widac ze Polak potrafi :) |
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| Dj_Underwater |
Hi man! it sounds a bit mono,try to use more reverb/delay stuff!
Main melody is really cheesy :P but nice to hear something from you man.You can do it better :) |
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| Darkone55 |
Sounds nice, bit strange kick maybe, but that gives it a nice club-feel. Hmm, the pads at 1:10 are a bit loud compared to the synth I think. I drowns a bit in it's own sound. Melody is quite nice. :)
The climax sounds a bit.. empty maybe, but that's not the right word. It has niet very much power. I think because of the percussion. A good percussion gives it much power.
The track is a bit short, I liked it!
Two things: the tracks leans too much on the pads in stead of the synths, and the percussion could be a bit better. Try to find some tutorials and stuff, that could realy help.
Good luck! |
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