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| Icone |
Hey there!
I think this is beginning to sound pretty nice. I'm not too fond of the chord progression, but the sounds are quite fine I think. Bassline, kick and percussion are good (maybe the percs are just a tiny bit too loud).
I do think the song needs more structure to it, to make it sound more pleasable to the ear.
Hope this helps a little ;)
Bye,
Wim |
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| moolow |
Thanx for the advices Wim! :)
I must say I'm really glad that u like the percussions! ..that's my weakness. |
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| extalin |
moolow! :)
i'm listening right now.
this has a really nice happy feel. i especially like the bass and chords composition (the instruments sound really good too)
spacy fx are good and i can't fault the percs (i might change the open hi hat, but that is just a little picky thing)
good to hear new music from you.
later,
-rob |
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| moolow |
Thanx Rob!
I'm glad u like it ..so far. :)
Maybe I'll re-make it later. |
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| JoeyEnv |
| Love this. Sounds are crisp and clear. Ah, maybe that chord progression needs work. Percussion is sweet though. :) |
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| andreas1999 |
nice work. i think the kick is a bit un-trancey :). but maybe that's the point. i mean, there's no real oomph in it :).
but the chords are quite nice and percussions are good. i would probably lower the volume on those rim-shots percs (or whatever it is) just a bit .
good luck with it :) |
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| eulerfx |
- imo percussion is a bit too technic, it doesnt seem to flow along with the beat
- overall, the track seems empty and could use more strings, pads
- the bass is too common, you should try experimenting
- i actually like the chord progression, very chill |
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| Luke Terry |
really nice melody, structure and bass is lacking somewhat...
with a bit of direction this could be turned into something really good
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| moolow |
Thanx for the feedback!!
I will put my energy in the chords JoeyEnv :tongue2 (and the kick Andreas :D)
Am going to make a different buildup (eulerfx & Luke Terry):) |
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| Knatter |
| The tune has a nice feel to it but you need to work on the kick. It's much to weak and needs to be replaced by something much stompier. |
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| Tech0rz |
Hmm, it seems a bit plain despite the main synth being so lively. I don't think theres enough to it for my liking, maybe one more lead synth that just draws interest back now and again.
Overall tho i agree with a little work this could be a great track. |
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