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my Thrillseekers inspired track
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| Mycron |
hello mates,
here's my new track i worked on a lot, inspired by massively some Steve Helstrip aka Thrillseekers production, so i hope you will like it:)
SAMPLE UPDATED!
Peter Safranyos presents Halcyon Kiss - Halcyon Kiss (sample)
it's the unmastered version, so it will sound a bit flat
all comments, suggestions would be much appreciated!
thanks for listening to my music,
PS: might be a vocal mix of it, if someone seriously interested remixing it, PM me:)
cheers,
Peter:) |
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| teknasia |
1st!
again a nice track!
but i don't like the mel in the break.. u can hear it clear at 2:39
dunno if it's just me :)
maybe eq your bassline? don't think this is a mastered version so i'll keep my bassline-comments for the mastered one :)
I always loved your sounds you're using!
keep it going m8! |
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| Peter K |
this is very uplifting Pete! Quite similiar in feel to Steve Helstrip's works.
All the melodies are superb, I especially like the one that is introduced at 4:01, it really adds to it.
I suggest sending this off to a label! If you don't have any luck with the labels, be sure to share the full song here, I would really like to have it.
Great stuff, probably my favourite of your work |
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| EternalMusic |
Love it Peter :). The sound needs abit beefing up but i guess this hasnt been mastered yet.
Everything is perfect, i like that funky synth :D.
Cheers. |
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| Jake Conlon |
very nice track :D
can imagine this being something John O'Callaghan would play.
and if this gets released id buy it ;)
*sorry the comment is not very costructive* |
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| Luke Terry |
the track is very nice, but the kick/percs/bassline are really lacking and spoil the composition
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| Jay M |
Hey m8.
A few (hopefully) constructive things from my side as I listen:
Nice bass and nice lead. The synth effect there is a good one, you can use that in more productions!
The high lead thing is a bit too loud I think. It has a lot of delay and that makes it a bit blurry. It's very "Safranyos" but try to back it up a bit, cause it's a bit disturbing IMO.
Hm before the break is quite a long part in which nothing happens, a bit of a drag. I think people will loose attention here.
A while after the break another lead comes up, I think it's better off coming up in the break, cause it's a bit out of nothing now.
Maybe speed it up a bit, tho the low tempo suits it well too..
Nice side fx, pleasant percussion, good pads.
I hope this helps. I have to say the rest is very high quality. Pretty solid stuff! Keep it up Pete!
:)
-Jay |
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| Expher |
Steve Helstrip is one of my favourite tranceproducers, and it's very interessting with tracks that been influensed by him. I guess some gets good, and some bad. In my opinion, this is one of the good ones.
Good atmosphear along the melody, although it gets pretty unintressting after a while playing. Break is really nice imo, but the buildup's kinda hasty, and soon climax is soon on. Sounds pretty ASOT-like, actually, but way better imo. Even though I think it's a great peice of music, I have to say that the postwork of this track has to be improved a lot (and yeah, I know it's only a sample, but it have to be mentioned ;)).
Hope seeing this on a vinyl in future time mate ;) Continue working :)
Regards
Expher |
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| djrenco |
Hey Pete,
Really like what you ve done. ok here is my oppinion:
- bassline is a bit weak, give it some more power (maybe less reverb/delay)
- the synths are very well.
- choirs are good
- melodies are ok
anyway it sounds good so far, can't wait to hear a full version!
cheers mate,
Renco:) |
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| Massive84 |
Could be taste, but i didn't like this at all.
heard way better from you. |
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| Shepless |
Hey Pete :)
Love the acid noises you got going in this one! Top notch! Kick could do with a tad more volume on on it! And it does sound like its a little over compressed in places...
Nice breakdown! Could do with some vocals :) i think you should get em done anyway, even if some one doesnt remix it! Nice breaks going on...
Hmmmm when its kicked back in its seemed to have lost its energy? I cant put my finger on it exactly, maybe take an element out when the breaks play and then reintorduce it when everything comes back in? Just you get used to the stuff with the breaks as the build, so when the same things come in after its a little like "oh..."
Hope thats some help to you mate!
Good work, polish it off and you got yourself a winner!
Shep |
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