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| Dj_Underwater |
Hi ,it's been a while when i posted here something from me ,so it's time for something new!
I've finished this track about a month ago and i want to know your opinions!
Feedback is as always apreciated!
Thanx
D O W N L O A D H E R E
Łukasz |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey,
Listening ... Intro sounds good , reminds me kinda Protoculture style, but at 0.04 there's a sound making distortion, I would compress that part.I like background sounds you use, give a lot of athmosphere to the Track.The breakdown is really nice,at 4:12 all clash a bit imo.
In overall, the track is great, I liked your melodys and it's very uplifting, I just would work a bit more the mastering but so far I like it a lot :D.
Kopi =o. |
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| alexpea |
1. Obviously, Kopi Luwak didn't wear headphones while listening, because I really can't hear what's wrong with the sound after 4 seconds.
2. I think you're kickdrum is a bit loud, and it has a nasty touch in the end... Like a hardtrance-kick almost. :nervous: Please turn the volume on it down, and cut the end of it.
3. I'm really impressed by the quality on the reverb-effect you're using. In reason, it's hard to achieve such quality.
4. The first minute of the song is absolutely flawless. And at 1.24, you bring the bassline in. What a bassline :eek: Beautiful!!! As Kopi said, alot of FX's in the background here, and it sounds lovely.
5. The break after 3 minutes is good. Perfect time to start the break. At 03.38 there's an offkey in the pads :whip: At 03.53 too! It destroys the harmony!
6. I think the melody is a bit too stereo. Too deep into the mix, when it should be more up front.
God one. Really quality sounds you've used, but the melodies and stuff in this one didn't impress me at all. :rolleyes: |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by alexpea
1. Obviously, Kopi Luwak didn't wear headphones while listening, because I really can't hear what's wrong with the sound after 4 seconds.
2. I think you're kickdrum is a bit loud, and it has a nasty touch in the end... Like a hardtrance-kick almost. :nervous: Please turn the volume on it down, and cut the end of it.
3. I'm really impressed by the quality on the reverb-effect you're using. In reason, it's hard to achieve such quality.
4. The first minute of the song is absolutely flawless. And at 1.24, you bring the bassline in. What a bassline :eek: Beautiful!!! As Kopi said, alot of FX's in the background here, and it sounds lovely.
5. The break after 3 minutes is good. Perfect time to start the break. At 03.38 there's an offkey in the pads :whip: At 03.53 too! It destroys the harmony!
6. I think the melody is a bit too stereo. Too deep into the mix, when it should be more up front.
God one. Really quality sounds you've used, but the melodies and stuff in this one didn't impress me at all. :rolleyes: |
Hahaha yeah, I will avoid to make reviews about mastering with my Job PC speakers :).
Kopi =o. |
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| Icone |
Hi mate!
I quite like this track, I'm missing this style a whole lot on these forums...
There wasn't anything that I could put my finger on and say 'hey this isn't right' (also with the kickdrum everything seemed fine to me). The track is perhaps just a little bit muddy, but it works.
Good job!
Wim |
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| Sunquest |
all the sounds sound great to me
love the fx and reverb and stated above
however, the melody there is a little too much going on its not soo clear whats what, u gotta make the saw synth louder, to make it clearer, i love this style of bass u used, just like yahel and 2 players used ;) fantastic
overall i really like this track, definatly will be in playlist for a while :D thanks a lot for sharing
peace out
PS: dunno if anyone noticed this but @ 3:3:38 ur pad notes are off, something is off there... so check that out ;) |
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| Timothy |
| Really nice work. It's really great. Altough the track sounds a bit 'clouded' expecially after the break, ( maybe too much reverb :conf: ) |
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| Massive84 |
Am fan of waterplanet. One of the best trancers for me in 2004.
K let me start
your bass lacks so bad, i can't feel the drive. No sub? and this is on headphones.
Kick seems fine.
Intro is quite driving imo and nice.
1.23 that snare sucked imo. smooth the sound out or do something else to introduce the bass.
really nice sounds in the intro, nice job on that.
Break is oke, melody is great! (can be a little less loud imo)
Improve few things here and there, but i really think this is great. love your melodies :). |
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| staticblue |
beautiful sounds and amazing climax.
the mixing isn't very good though
> big gap in the 120 - 400 Hz range > lack of fullness.
> fortunetly you seem to have compensated this by putting too much 500 - 4000 Hz which adds to the loudness and this is the reason of the apparent mudiness IMO.
i can be more precise if you want.
except those problems, the track is a real BEAUTY.
static blue |
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| retiro |
| Great kick - almost Airwave style! Its really well put together - nothing ground breaking but releaseable none the less! |
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| Dj_Underwater |
| Thanks people :) Im glad you like it |
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| alexpea |
| Yeah, nice work for sure. But as me and Sunquest said, there are some offkeys in your pads :confused: |
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