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first real music attempt..
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| Takkra |
Here's a song I did with fruityloops.. still very basic but I can't really think much else I could do with it.. plus the bass seems to stay a problem in this song.
I let a dj on my school play it in the "springparty" but the crowd reacted very positive.. still.. Im not satisfied with this.. can anyone help me?
)Here ye go !
Genre: Trance
Duration: 6:28
Bitrate: 256kb/s (wma.. srry cant render mp3's in some way:conf: ) |
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| websley |
Let me see...
That kick is just too outdated... Sounds really fruity to me. I like what you did with the begining bass, but you maybe need to build some energy around it. It just sounds too muddy right now. I like the sequencer at 1:45, but I think you should hold that one longer. I don't like the breakdown, it's not only too empty... the steel drums sound like total horror to me. maybe you should give it a really dirty filter or something. And after the break, the real bass comes in. Too loud, imo. Really need to polish up your track, dude. I do like the melody, but the bass (after the breakdown) is just too loud if you compare it to the kick:( |
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| Takkra |
you got me thinking about a total make-over ;)
I wasn't too sure about the steeldrums too you know.. I just wanted to be original ;).. still im positive that there should be a break with perclike things in it.. yea your right about the volume too..
im looking into that:o btw what do you with "muddy" in "It just sounds too muddy right now."?
Thanks for your quick reply anyway! it helps alot! |
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| Tech0rz |
ARGH :mad:
Secodn time today this has happened. I type a reply, then either, i forgot 2 put a title in, or i posted a reply to another thread within 20 seconds of pressing submit on this thread, and i get a message telling me that i couldn't post, but then the message i typed has vanished, meaning i have to either type it out again, or not reply. Very annoying, posted in the Suggestions about this.
In regards to the song, i agree entirely with Messiah.
the song ended but i didn't hear a bass line. One would thicken this track up loads.
The steel drums, i think you should replace the drums with a lead synth or something, anything but the steel drums lol.
But its definatly better than my first song, which was just a bunch of crazy noises. :D
I just started a thread about first attempt at songs Here, you could post yours there if its the very first thing u ever did?. |
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| Takkra |
oh its the first real thing though..
not the first thing I eever rendered..
its the second thing lol..
the first thing was just 5 minutes of a rockguitarsound with all the effects I could make lo.. no im not gonna post that:rolleyes:
edit:
nice signature Tech0rz :haha: keep your sources hidden.. :D love it
edit(2): Whats so wrong about the steeldrums? I cant hear it...:conf: |
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| R.j. |
this song is TOO thin.... phatten it up nigga...
u got boring percussion...
@ 2:00.... how bout something other than pad-type thingy...
steeldrums? take em out...
@ 3:10... sounds cool.. would sound better if u phattened that synth up
@ 3:44 that lil OOP OOP OOP reminds me of that gooie thingy from zelda ITS GOT TO GO!
ok pretty much after 3:44 its boring... and repetive..
oh well, ok for a first timer
2.3/10 |
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| Tech0rz |
| quote: | Originally posted by Takkra
nice signature Tech0rz :haha: keep your sources hidden.. :D love it |
The one and only, Albert Einstein ;) I bet he was into Sci-Trance...AHHAHA GET IT??? SCI ??? no? :sadgreen: |
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| Takkra |
Link isnt dead..?
no im not a post-whore.
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| Tech0rz |
ZzZ The Goddess
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| Sunclyder |
It's my turn Takkra :p
Eq is ing bad, hmmmm...
I don't listen something message in your song. You must more, more working, becouse creation good music is arcyhard.
Work work work man!! :p
Greetzzzzzzzzzz |
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| Mr Rogers |
| how long does a track stay on the yousendit server?? anyone know? |
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