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Trevor Kay - Spacement
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| sooper |
I finished a new tune! It's been a long time coming because I found out you can "download" free porn using this thing called "The Internet", and I've been quite distracted.
Anyway, here's some melodic prog ... goes well with porn :toothless
Made in Reason 2.5
128 kbs
9:11
8.41 Mb
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Trevor Kay - Spacement
Thanks for taking the time to listen, and for any feedback & suggestions that you may have!
Trevor |
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| 1mason11 |
Hello Mate,
great new track here.i liked already your track toad and this is also nice proggy stuff.fits very good to the beginning of a trance set.nothing bad to say.keep it up.;)
Riialto:cool: |
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| IKKI-ZUVK |
Pretty nice track once again, I like it as much as I still like Toad !
It would be much better if it was 192+ kbs (that would've made me day)
Keep up the great work !
Cheers |
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| Massive84 |
hey Trev
The track is nice, however it didn't really catch me like toad.
it missed some kinda flow.
thats all mate |
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| Jay M |
Pretty minimal start. Lots of sounds in it tho, that's positive. But the synths here sound a bit flat. Standard saws, standard pulses, not very special and that's the thing that bothers me a bit about this track. Further there's no hook in it to grab me.. I do like the pads in the break, nice. Production is clean too.
Keep up.
-Jay |
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| sooper |
| quote: | Originally posted by 1mason11
Hello Mate,
great new track here.i liked already your track toad and this is also nice proggy stuff.fits very good to the beginning of a trance set.nothing bad to say.keep it up.;)
Riialto:cool: |
Thanks for taking the time to listen - I appreciate your kind words :)
| quote: | Originally posted by IKKI-ZUVK
Pretty nice track once again, I like it as much as I still like Toad !
It would be much better if it was 192+ kbs (that would've made me day)
Keep up the great work !
Cheers |
Awesome! Thanks buddy - keep well.
| quote: | Originally posted by Massive84
hey Trev
The track is nice, however it didn't really catch me like toad.
it missed some kinda flow.
thats all mate |
Hey Fahad - your feedback is most valuable - think that the lack of flow was in the percussion, or elsewhere? Thanks for listening.
| quote: | Originally posted by Jay M
Pretty minimal start. Lots of sounds in it tho, that's positive. But the synths here sound a bit flat. Standard saws, standard pulses, not very special and that's the thing that bothers me a bit about this track. Further there's no hook in it to grab me.. I do like the pads in the break, nice. Production is clean too.
Keep up.
-Jay |
Thanks for the review Jay. I tried to modulate the sounds using automation on the LFO.. maybe a lil more attention to effects will help with the flat sounds - thanks for pointing that out. Something to think about for the next tune! :D |
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| Massive84 |
Well no not the perc, but more the atmosphere.
in Toad it starts so relaxing and summerish that it kept me listening, and it kept going like that.
I missed something like (a certain emotion or feel) this in spacement, also based on taste this :) |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Hey mate,
Listened to the track. Very nice progressive stuff. I would have liked to hear something more happen during the track, I find it a bit empty now.
The sound quality however is nice and you do know how to make a progressive track. So my compliments for that.
Cheers!
Nomen Nescio |
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| Nemesis44 |
Nice track, top quality... not much else to say.
Cheers
Nem |
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| hansolo |
I like this one as well. Happy you pointed it out to me. It reminds me of some of your other tunes. Similar precussive sounds, but i really dig the melodies in this.
Keep up the great work. |
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| BOOsTER |
| quote: | Originally posted by sooper
... goes well with porn :toothless
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errrrm, I'm just thinking like...well with porn? ahhh that beat...up down...up...down :D
anyway...yo? that girl in your avatar...is she beatsynced to your new beat? ;) :D
errmmmmm well finally to the tune :)
interesting bassline :) that's first thing which I noticed (maybe I am just more noticing ¨them now...worked on mine lol) hmmm I like how u combine the mellow sounds (like the percussive synth) with some harder like the synth in background...
interesting melodies also...anyway...I would shorten the part before breakdown...I am at 3:20 or so right now...and still there's not much :) just some non-kick parts and so on...though it sounds good...
the cymbal is a bit too ear uneasy :D or how to say...I think it sounds a bit too high.
ahhh here comes the expected breakdown:) I like the way you combine mellow and hard sounds...really good work on it...
now you make me wow! the bassline in the breakdown is great! ;)
nice work on the rythm of the whole song...
so now let's make a summary: GREAT WORK! :)
Peace,
B. |
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| sooper |
| quote: | Originally posted by Massive84
Well no not the perc, but more the atmosphere.
in Toad it starts so relaxing and summerish that it kept me listening, and it kept going like that.
I missed something like (a certain emotion or feel) this in spacement, also based on taste this :) |
OK! I think I understand where you're coming from. I'll keep that in mind when I get started on my next tune - thanks again :)
| quote: | Originally posted by Nomen Nescio
Hey mate,
Listened to the track. Very nice progressive stuff. I would have liked to hear something more happen during the track, I find it a bit empty now.
The sound quality however is nice and you do know how to make a progressive track. So my compliments for that.
Cheers!
Nomen Nescio |
Thanks for the kind words - I guess it does have a bit of a minimal feel to it. I'll try fill it up a little if I revisit the toon.
| quote: | Originally posted by Nemesis44
Nice track, top quality... not much else to say.
Cheers
Nem |
Thanks Nem! :D
| quote: | Originally posted by hansolo
I like this one as well. Happy you pointed it out to me. It reminds me of some of your other tunes. Similar precussive sounds, but i really dig the melodies in this.
Keep up the great work. |
Thanks for the review solo - your feedback is most valuable.
| quote: | Originally posted by BOOsTER
errrrm, I'm just thinking like...well with porn? ahhh that beat...up down...up...down :D
anyway...yo? that girl in your avatar...is she beatsynced to your new beat? ;) :D
errmmmmm well finally to the tune :)
interesting bassline :) that's first thing which I noticed (maybe I am just more noticing ¨them now...worked on mine lol) hmmm I like how u combine the mellow sounds (like the percussive synth) with some harder like the synth in background...
interesting melodies also...anyway...I would shorten the part before breakdown...I am at 3:20 or so right now...and still there's not much :) just some non-kick parts and so on...though it sounds good...
the cymbal is a bit too ear uneasy :D or how to say...I think it sounds a bit too high.
ahhh here comes the expected breakdown:) I like the way you combine mellow and hard sounds...really good work on it...
now you make me wow! the bassline in the breakdown is great! ;)
nice work on the rythm of the whole song...
so now let's make a summary: GREAT WORK! :)
Peace,
B. |
Hey Booster! Thanks for listening and taking the time to put down all your thoughts in your review. I'm grateful for your kind words, and the advice/suggestions for improvement - I'll keep it all in mind for next time! :) |
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