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Madama Butterfly - KFS
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| Nemesis44 |
Hey guys, been a while since I offered anything here. DJing plus eating and breathing tend to occupy a lot of my time. ;)
Keep in mind I am not a genious producer, just doing this for the fun of it.
KFS - Madama Butterfly
Any pointers, tips etc. will be greatfully recieved.
I know there are some issues with the track so don't worry about hurting my feelings too much.
Look forward to your comments
All the best
Nem |
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| IKKI-ZUVK |
WOW, sorry to hurt your feeling mate, but this track rocks, wonder what would happen if you were a genious producer!
Please get rid off that vocals at the beginning of the break down.
Very nice breakdown (w/o the vocals)
Awesome track overalll.
I thought you just were a great DJ, I had not idea you were also a great producer imo!
Cheers |
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| Nomen Nescio |
hey mate,
This track is packed with energy. Listened with pleasure to it. You could let the pads during the build up stand out a bit more. Compared to the beat they are a bit muffled.
Furthermore work on the mastering. You do not have a lot of mid frequencies and the whole track sounds a bit canned.
But overall a nice energetic pulsating track which kept me listening with pleasure until the end. A bit of old fashioned Dummonde style ;)
Cheers,
Nomen Nescio |
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| MessiahProject |
Man this is awesome!!
Sounds very professional, keeps pumping energy from the very start to the end.
Nice job my friend,
Keep it up.
MP |
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| Icone |
Sounds very nice to me there mate! You've been too modest with me in your email ;)
The only thing that bothered me a little was the fact that the lead sounded a bit dry, perhaps also open the filter 100%? The clap also sounded a bit off, would love to have had a 'regular' one - but guess that's peanuts.
Good job so far!
Cheers,
Wim |
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| Nemesis44 |
I will ditch the vocals happily. Actually something that my wife wanted in there more than me so you can blame her. ;)
Will work on the mids and also open up the filter etc.
Thanks for the comments guys.
Cheers
Nem |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey,
Listening ..... Great drums, they sound very well done, I am digging them ;), the rest, all sounds fine, is a bit minimalist for my taste, but that's just me :D, as someone else mentioned, U should use the filter 100%, but that's just a very lil detail, other than that, the Mastering it's Superb!, this is an awesome track indeed, good work mate ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| sooper |
WOW! this is an energetic monster! sooo much forward momentum.
no suggestions.. I love this tune as is :)
Hope to hear more of your stuff soon,
Trev |
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| Jay M |
Hey Nem!
Hehe I was a fan of your God track, but then it suddenly became quiet around you.. Let's have a listen to this.
I think the bassline is a bit too backward in the mix, I'd give that a bit more body. Levels here and there are a bit odd.
But you have used some great sounds. The sweeping synth is a nice one. The hats are very crisp.. a bit too crisp, maybe add some more low end.. that is mid freqs. There's a lot of highs in the whole mix actually..
Nice vocal hehe.
It ain't really my style with the off snare and all, but it's overal a pretty good production.
Nem's back :D
-Jay |
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| Nemesis44 |
Forgot to mention actually that I haven't really put any effort into masterint this yet, partially because I'm not very good at it. he he.
Cheers
Nem |
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| Jay M |
| quote: | Originally posted by Nemesis44
Forgot to mention actually that I haven't really put any effort into masterint this yet, partially because I'm not very good at it. he he.
Cheers
Nem |
Well this is more an EQ and level thingy I was talking about, that could do a lot in the mix. Mastering sucks hehe, don't put too much time in it.. |
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| Massive84 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Jay M
Well this is more an EQ and level thingy I was talking about, that could do a lot in the mix. Mastering sucks hehe, don't put too much time in it.. |
i dont know, it seems to be swimming in highs, making the tune a bit airy.
at 2.59 when the pads come in it gets really nice.
Some extra theme would be nice.
Good to see yuou back Nem |
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