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| DJ_RoKo |
sup,
what do you's think of this riff or melody of what ever the fingers you wanna call it, coz i dont no wot to really think of it. i dunno i just reckon it sounds kinda cheesy, or maybe thers sumfn else about it, i dunno??? its just something i came up with and liked at first but later kinda began questioning it.
tel us what you think,
http://s34.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...9L154RPNPDM00VF
peace
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| Quinders |
| Linko no workaroo |
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| wayfinder |
| this sucks, you suck, stop posting, learn english. |
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| mzvirbulis |
how about you learn anger managment!!!!!!!!!:whip:
;)
hey melody was ok!!!! maybe could be made into a sub melody? |
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| DigiNut |
I normally don't criticize this stuff in tracks, but since you asked:
- Chord progression really doesn't have much direction. You want to try and return to I from V, or sometimes IV, or VI only in a I-VI-I progression (these rules only break down in jazz or funk). It all seems to be in key and everything, which is good, but I'm just not sure where it's going.
- The instrument/sample you're using doesn't seem to be packing much of a punch. I'd suggest changing or layering that.
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| Project 7 |
| I pretty much agree with the above, i dunno it sounds ok but there isnt much of a progression there, i dont know if you have one already but have a look into a midi controller or just get cheapo synth with midi out probarbly will help you alot! |
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| DJ_RoKo |
cheers fellas, it does sound a bit wierd that way, thought it might have something to do with chord progression and i know what you mean by its sounds as if its leading to nowhere. i guess i only liked coz i was hammering away at the comp for so long and i forgot what auctually sounds good and you know when you come up with somethin half decent after sittn there for a awhile, you get a lil bit too happy over something small. but it does sound rather random doesn't it. also just wanted to see what kind of response i would get from something like this.
cheers guys
peace
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| DJ Ambin |
The melody is sorta................ lame.
It does not go anywhere. Work on it. |
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| wayfinder |
| quote: | | Originally posted by DJ_RoKo (f*** you wayfinder) |
Just saying it like it is. On a scale from 0 to , the melody is . You're obviously either on drugs or stupid (just look at the way you spell "something" - sumfn). You post this little ty bitty because you don't have the patience to finish a song and post it in the Amateur Producers Promotion Forum, you want instant praise. The whole post looks like a three-year old telling his parents he just took a : "MOM! DAD! LOOK WHAT I MADE!!! IS THAT GOOOOOOOOOOOOD?" |
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| TVG |
| Man I feel like puking. |
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| DJ_RoKo |
lol, hahahaha dude im not going to bother having a go at ya coz what you said was pretty damn funny and your right i cant be stuffed finishing a track, mainly coz im lacking a lot of inspiration at the moment and things aren't really going well around home. in case you didn't notice its actually easier to spell it like that, lol, i still think your a prick though even though what you said has alot of truth. lol
f*** you wayfinder, lol
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