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::Uplifting Trance:: Altuna - Shella (original mix) 128kbps
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| DJ Dinz |
Hi TAzzzzz
i will like to make some noise again haha
so this is my new track!!
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n i need feedback on this track.. have confident in it :D :D
Thank You! |
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| Aquarian |
*bump*
Glad to see you used some of my suggestions :p
I'll probably be able to give you more detail when I get home and have time to listen to the whole thing - but just from listening to little bits I'd say it sounds great. ;) |
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| Lalin |
| There is no file on the site...or I can't see it |
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| DJ Dinz |
Guys sorry for the dead link... is fix now...
Im sorry! :D
Thnx |
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| tylerc |
| Ok from the start it sounds nice, but that clap is WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY too loud. That needs to be cut in half at least and turn the reverb waay down as well. It's already getting irritating to listen to becuase of that clap. In that break your synths are a bit too loud as well, bass sounds nice, but itss hard to hear under all the other stuff. Nice choir pads during the break. The lead isnt bad by any means, but it could use a bit of brightening. But I'm now at 4:30 in and I just can't listen anymore cuz of that clap. I would suggest going back and doing a lot of work on levels. Other than that it sounds pretty good. |
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| staticblue |
This will sound alot better without this clap man :D
best stuff i heard from you uptillnow :) groovey bassline. good job ! |
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| Lalin |
| Sounds good except...well I don't even need to tell you now... |
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| technoman |
This is a great track man.Superb.(minus the clap)
Everything comes together very nicely.
I love the melody throughout.(top stuff there)
What programs are you using?
Im a neewbie so i have one question.At 6:23 what is that drum roll called(how do you achieve that)
Oh and nice piano work too. |
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| Aquarian |
| Ok I'd probably agree about the clap. Don't kill it completely though, just reduce it a bit. It's really not that bad.. maybe I just like loud claps. :conf: |
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| Aquarian |
| quote: | Originally posted by technoman
Im a neewbie so i have one question.At 6:23 what is that drum roll called(how do you achieve that)
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As far as I know it's just called a drumroll and you achieve it with a volume slide. :wtf: |
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| iloop |
| quote: | Originally posted by tylerc
Ok from the start it sounds nice, but that clap is WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY too loud. That needs to be cut in half at least and turn the reverb waay down as well. It's already getting irritating to listen to becuase of that clap. In that break your synths are a bit too loud as well, bass sounds nice, but itss hard to hear under all the other stuff. Nice choir pads during the break. The lead isnt bad by any means, but it could use a bit of brightening. But I'm now at 4:30 in and I just can't listen anymore cuz of that clap. I would suggest going back and doing a lot of work on levels. Other than that it sounds pretty good. |
agree completely, also the level of the hi's is way to high... a bit hard on the ears. I can barely hear the low end because of that when i turn it up...
the melody is fine, the arrangement is alright: those are usualy artists choice, not my preference cause it sounds a bit uninspired- but i think even that would sound way better once the hi's are dealt with.
those are just opinions and some improvements i think you can make, this song has a lot of potential tho...
cheers :) |
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| technoman |
Hey Aquarian,
I see you from Laval.
Im from Ile perrot.Are there a lot of montreal guys here?
Do you have anything that you produced that i can take a listen to? |
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