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Yes, I'm a girl. :) 4am - Resonant Dreams (pg. 2)
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| Terry Barker |
now cumon, enough boys... were here for the music :)
I like the percussion buildup, is that one shot samples or loops?, The kick in is arite, the kick itself could be more powerful, the bass is nice. Not much element iv got to say, the arp is repedativ and boring, The piano is jus repeating, Maybe work on the intro structure...
The breakdown is simple, nice pads again the piano at the start is boring but a bit later it starts to vary and im liking, again the arp has nice melody just the notation is not all there, maybe play with the lead?
Youve got the percussion and mastering and what elements to use, the notation and melody side of things need more work and youll have a good track.
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| The Drow |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
I don't see how that has anything to do with music production anyway... |
Well what I think she meant was that there aren't many girls producing so here she is. |
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| The Drow |
can you upload it to yousendit.com?
Omer
p.s.
check your pm box. |
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| 4am |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
I don't see how that has anything to do with music production anyway... |
It doesn't. It's the fact that almost everywhere I post, I get called dude or man or bloke. :conf: I just wanted it established that I'm a female. If people were saying "you go girl" to you, I think you'd want to establish your gender ASAP. It's been 2 years I've been putting up with that on various forums. So today, I decided to "come out". :tongue3 |
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| Mycron |
Heather,
I hope you're as hot as your music :)
You are definiely making your way up there, if you continue producing like this, i'm sure you will get signed one day. ;)
Good luck with your future productions ! :)
Peter |
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| EtherealSL |
| quote: | Originally posted by The Drow
p.s.
check your pm box. |
OMG HI TOOO YOOOOOOOOOOO
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| Four_On_Four-er |
You remind me of ATB with a touch of other elements... This track is very slick.
You go, girl!
I like the bass... it's warm and fuzzy. The kick is standard and fitting. The piano adds to the vibe, and the saw-ish sounds are driving this track home. Very smooth. |
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| EtherealSL |
| quote: | Originally posted by Nemesis44
Don't be put off by the fact that some of the juveniles don't know how to act in front of a lady. |
c'mon, gimmie a break, big guy. :(
in all seriousness, here's the review... couldn't do it before cause my comp's having trouble streaming:
intro is fine, piano is a great touch... but if you want a mixable intro, you should start off 4x4 kicks (unless this is some radio/intro mix). the crash is too bright, makes me squint, cut hi's on that. piano could be louder. the lead is not too great, sounds like it's has a huge phasor effect on it. bassline is boring, you need a second synth doing some sort of midbass to keep the drive, as this sounds too oldschool. ditch the vocals, they don't fit very well.
gl with future productions, i hope you're as hot as your mu--
wait, peter already beat me to it
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| Mycron |
| quote: | Originally posted by EtherealSL
wait, peter already beat me to it
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ah dear:crazy: |
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| Nemesis44 |
| quote: | Originally posted by EtherealSL
c'mon, gimmie a break, big guy. :(
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He he, don't worry dude, wasn't aimed at anyone in particular. Just seen threads turn into complete chaos because someone found out that there was a female poster in it. :)
Cheers
Nem |
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| Mycron |
| quote: | Originally posted by Nemesis44
He he, don't worry dude, wasn't aimed at anyone in particular. Just seen threads turn into complete chaos because someone found out that there was a female poster in it. :)
Cheers
Nem |
nope,
nishant and me especially LOVE female producers:tongue3 :tongue3 :tongue3 |
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