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Yes, I'm a girl. :) 4am - Resonant Dreams (pg. 3)
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| EtherealSL |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mycron
nope,
nishant and me especially LOVE female producers:tongue3 :tongue3 :tongue3 |
lol this thread is officially hijacked... sorry 4am, :stongue: |
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| vA|sYn[D]rOm |
| not bad track piano should be little louder and end of the track should be longer =] imo |
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| IKKI-ZUVK |
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btw; I'm a guy ;) |
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| EtherealSL |
| quote: | Originally posted by IKKI-ZUVK
btw; I'm a guy ;) |
omghi2222YOU!!!!!111111oneone |
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| DigiNut |
OMGWTFBBQHI2UBUTTSEKZ!!!?????
LOL... some of you *really* need to get out more often. |
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| Rayan |
OMGWTFBBQHI2UBUTTSEKZ???
could someone translate that to me?
hihi!!! I know the start "ohh my good What the "? And I dont know more! |
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| EtherealSL |
| quote: | Originally posted by DigiNut
OMGWTFBBQHI2UBUTTSEKZ!!!?????
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i'll do the translation for you: I ARE TEH STOOPID |
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| Mycron |
| quote: | Originally posted by EtherealSL
i'll do the translation for you: I ARE TEH STOOPID |
:wtf: |
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| richg101 |
i gotto admit i didnt check this purely on the basis it looked like everyone was just replying with chat up lines..:)
overall; the track sounds pleasant to the ears with some nice sounds. the overall track sounds nice and minimal but full at the same time. bass is not nice- very late 90's trance:(. maybe a longnote bass would work better and add to the 'robert miles' sound you have while remaining sophisticated?
break. those pianos sound really nice. i have tried using a detuned sounding piano before but couldnt place it right in my track.
long break..... im glad because it deserves it.
vocal. not good:( ruins the track imo.
main part. - nice but needs something else. an improvised powerful string line to give it some emotion. other than that a pleasant listen:)
rich:) |
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| IKKI-ZUVK |
Sorry CHICK but this thread has been officially hijacked :)
Why do u tell us about yourself? |
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| alexpea |
Nice track :cool:
Heh, " Artist: 4am \0/ "
hahahaha... :p |
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| Drik |
Amazing how much attention it gets when the word "girl" is in it :)
Rightly deserved though, there are way too few female producers.
I don't think I want to add much to small details here and there because I think it has been covered already.
I think this would feel good with more layers. That would deffo get it very uplifting. In the beginning with the arpeg, have two arpegs go together, the first one as you have now, the second one play in synch to the first one but in a twin melody that shifts more and builds that "uplifting" feel.
In the break, try having a solo piano or some synth sound build a melodic line to go with your other synths. Have a different more bassy string line fade in and build more atmosphere.
Just some ideas. Good luck with your music :)
/Fred |
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