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[p.e.g] - Luminence (Original mix) 192Kbps Melodic Trance (pg. 2)
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| staticblue |
"luminance" , nice name :D i have to check this.
What striked me at first listen was the lack of high freqs, which makes the mix sound pretty full but muffled at the same time.
I like your melodies overall, and that distorted synth is nice. The main sequence didn't amaze me though.
Nice track but not your best in my opinion :) |
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| Jay M |
Hi!
Pretty nice tune, but it misses the crispness necessary to make it real pro. It will clear stuff up too.
Bit dark atmosphere, liking it, great for variety in a set. Melody is good too, bit catchy.
Cheers!
-Yarune |
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| Nemesis44 |
Too fluffy for my tastes but it's a nice well made track.
Solid production overall but doesn't grab me. Would work really well for other DJs though.
Keep up the good work
Cheers
Nem |
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| eRRaTiK |
| quote: | Originally posted by tylerc
the bass seems to really clash with the kick on beats 1 & 3 of every measure. some minor eqing should take care of that. |
i agree with that.
| quote: | Originally posted by Kris Xperiment
you know like drrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrCrash! kick kick kick kick |
i LOL'd.
not sure if i like the melody, it is a bit too "fluffy" for my liking perhaps.
oh from 4:50 on i likesee! that melody sounds familiar. just can't put a finger on it atm.
good to hear something new from you though Phill. I'll wait to hear any updates you make. |
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| pho mo |
Hope you all had a good new years eve everyone, nice and messy as they should be :)
I've finished this tune now, thanks heaps for all of the excellent tips and feedback. I've updated the original link, and you can now download the full tune. Enjoy!
[p.e.g] luminence (192kpbs) |
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| EtherealSL |
awesome!
keept it up phil :) |
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| zookeeper |
| very nice:toocool: |
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| hardbeats100 |
from the first second, littreraly i can tell this tunes guna be good, it all sounds good, have i hered that before some where? ilke the way it comes into the brake and mite i say, what a nice brake! its beutifull(spell check) the only thing i will say is that it could do with a snair build up, it just seems to come in without warning, but thats the only crit i have, the rest is good. 9 outa 10. well made
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http://hardbeats100.moonfruit.com/
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thanx stay safe nd happy creating. ;) |
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| TOR |
maybe it's because i just listened to Static Blue - Beyond, but the mix sounds quite muffled.. dunno what happened there
anyway, the track itself is great. lot's of interesting elements, especially the main melody, which is quite old skool (reminds me of Cherrymoon Trax - The House of House). good stuff |
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| DJ Shibby |
Good smooth intro, nice percs and kick, and the bass fits well.
1:26 seems like it could be a better transition in some way; however, i like how it progresses after the initial shift.
2:21, good, all glued together lovely-ly. Enjoying it and its tranciness.
Nice smooth intro into the bridge. Something to keep my attention would make it even better, such as a vocal.
3:33 loving the tension build here through to 3:43.
Your countermelody is cute. I particular enjoy how it creates the flow, while the main arp lead lays the groundwork for the mood.
4:55 no complaints, loving the ups and downs. Very nice composition.
Builds beautifully, great transition back into the track. Something about the bassline or synth here seems like it could be "more" to really hit that build home.
More of the same goodness through to the end. No surprises, but that's okay...
The track is great at what it does. It could be more original perhaps, and have some more variation, but maybe it's just right the way it is now. I enjoyed it. A few more percs or hats might be nice in bits; experiment, perhaps not.
Thanks for sharing. :) |
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| pho mo |
thanks for the detailed feedback DJ Shibby :) And Tor and Harbeats too. Agreed about the muffled sound and as others suggested I've re-eq'd the tune and it should be a lot brighter. The link on the main page is updated.
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| Speactra |
Nice track you've got here. :tongue2
Nice melodies!
As tylerc said, I think that the kick and bassline clash with each other.
I recognice that melody after 5:35, but it's a very used pattern.
Great track overall.
Keep it up!
//Alex |
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