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****in around with rap/ poetry
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| Vivid Boy |
He said they really not real its just a front for the girls
and a whole bunch of females just caved his world
He was in pain, so ashamed, he wished he had not came, had to kindly pick up his face and ride home on the train
He had an open cart, plus the captain had called
that the train, anyways had reached its final stop
He got up, stopped abrupt, while he got lost in thought,face blank for 5 mins till his wallet had dropped
the bus, no cash, decided to walk home on the streets
mind still at the subway someoneelse was moving his feet
the end i got bored so i made it crappy at the end. lol. the first bit was good anyone else write any storylike poetry?
btw i just got bored and did this quickly. but i like storytelling poetry |
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| Vivid Boy |
| quote: | Originally posted by jonSun
First bit i liked |
u think i have a future in posting this for a living? or should i just keep posting as vivid boy and hope someday someone will discover me and give me my own tv show |
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| Estella |
| Hey it's almost in calibre with The Streets. I could listen to him with his accent spill stories all day. :o Hold on, must.find.one. |
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| Silky Johnson |
| quote: | Originally posted by Estella
The Streets. |
Word. |
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| jonSun |
| quote: | Originally posted by Vivid Boy
u think i have a future in posting this for a living? or should i just keep posting as vivid boy and hope someday someone will discover me and give me my own tv show |
Post as Vivid Boy, he's a made legend |
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| Estella |
The Streets - Could Well Be In Lyrics
Cuz her last relationship f**ked her up.
Got hurt majorly, finds it tough to trust.
Looked at the ashtray, then looked back up,
Spinnin it away on the tabletop.
She looked much fitter than saturday just.
She worked in JD's with dan.
Back then I figured she was pretty damn rough,
But she was only wearin her work stuff.
And in these clothes she looked more than buff,
She stirred her straw, sat up to adjust.
I told her I thought it was important,
That you could get lost in conversation.
Chattin , sittin in, oblivion
With that person who's your special one.
She said she was the worst pool player under the sun,
But blokes go easy so she always won.
I saw this thing on ITV the other week,
Said, that if she played with her hair, she's probably keen
She's playin with her hair, well regularly,
So i reckon i could well be in.
She didn't look too bored with what I was sayin.
Her hair looked much better than the other day.
She had her fingers 'round her hair, playin'.
I Saw on the telly that's a good indication.
Stood up to buy the next drink though, "Nay."
Suppose that's just our girl's way.
Im tryin to think what else I could say,
Peelin' the label off, spinnin the ashtray.
Yeah actually, yes, she did look pretty neat.
Her perfume smelled expensive and sweet.
I felt like my hair looked a bit cheap,
Wished I'd had it cut back last week.
She kept givin me this look, cuz she would speak.
Was she only friendly, or was she a keep?
Asked her if she wanted the same again to drink.
Started to turn and get up out my seat.
I saw this thing on ITV the other week,
Said, that if she played with her hair, she's probably keen
She's playin with her hair, well regularly,
So i reckon i could well be in.
She said that her close mates all were
Always the most important thing to her.
I said I thought it was a bit more blurred.
She asked what I meant by that as she stirred.
I told her about the money and what had occurred
With it goin missing from the living room, so.
With my best mates all there standin by,
Right where I left it, under their eyes.
So surely one of them might have spied
What happened to my money at that time.
I felt like they were all smilin on the side.
She was like "fair play" she couldn't say why.
She didn't know what all my mates were like.
And I said she just might be right.
Wish I had someone I could always rely,
Someone to get lost chattin to all night.
I saw this thing on ITV the other week,
Said, that if she played with her hair, she's probably keen
She's playin with her hair, well regularly,
So i reckon i could well be in.
As I walked back with more drinks to our place,
She had her phone stuck to the side of her face.
I sat for a minute while she chatted away
'bout somethin with her mom and her birthday.
Played for a bit with the same ashtray,
Thought about things while i sat and waited.
It was nice to chat about the in my head,
Someone who just listens to you instead.
I looked at the barman, wiping down again,
Looked at the football on the tv set,
Tryin to look like i weren't just waitin there
For her conversation to come to an end.
I look at my watch and realized right then
That, for three hours, been in conversation.
Before she put her phone down, she switched to silent,
And we carried on chattin for more than that again.
I saw this thing on ITV the other week,
Said, that if she played with her hair, she's probably keen
She's playin with her hair, well regularly,
So i reckon i could well be in. |
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| bangoSkank |
| As long as you keep up decent rhymes that aren't played out, your key is your producer :) |
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| Radagast |
He was sittin' in his seat writing poetry
Typin c's and d's, drinkin' hennessy
Is he really the best, surely you must jest
He should write lyrics for an optometry test
Then he stood up, and then he looked down
He was wearin a cup, he was wearin a frown
He looked round and round and listened for a sound
Because his pants were loose and had fallen to the ground
His pet dog Tim was watching him with a grin
And with a fast hoist of his pants that made him look nimble
He envied the ants, for the cup was a thimble |
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| StanVoid |
Well I was just standing here
and Tom Cruise locked himself in the closet
I asked myself why won't Tom Cruise just come out the closet?
Nobody has no answers
and so I pull out my gun!
Tell my why Tom Cruise in the closet or else I'm going to shoot someone! |
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| Omega_Blue |
| quote: | Originally posted by Vivid Boy
u think i have a future in posting this for a living? or should i just keep posting as vivid boy and hope someday someone will discover me and give me my own tv show |
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...the latter. |
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| Marc Summers |
I'm in the kitchen eating some chips
then I saw some girl shaking her hips
It was a female ninja! So I EMPTIED MY CLIPS
I CAPPED THAT BITCH 10 TIMES! I LIKE BLING BLING
LOOK AT MY ICE! BAM! I BANGED A HO!
I'M SO FRESH BECAUSE I HAVE CASUAL SEX!
I'M IN THE CLUB 'ACTING A FOOL'
THEN THIS GUY SAID 'SUP?'
SO I CAPPED HIS ASS
how's that rap? lol |
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