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[Dark Techno] Sander van Doorn - Punk'd (takkra remix 4c)
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| Takkra |
My try for the sander van doorn's punk'd remix compo.. dont know if ill finish or make it my own song.. coz I only used two sounds of his entire song lol.. would love to know what you guys feel when hearing this one :)
I worked really hard on the bassline so Id love to hear something about its goods and bads ;D
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Thnx in Advance.
UPDATE: Full Track Idea now!!!
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| linkmage |
Bassline is great....very trippy
some mess with structure.
tembres are also great,but need more work.need work with structure...;) I see great ideas,but you must improve them!
keep up!
moonbird |
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| richg101 |
BUMP!
hey takkra!
i look forward to checkin this out tonight. ill give you a critique later mate:)
rich:) |
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| Takkra |
BUMP woohoo!!
thanks moonbird for your advice :D! lookin forward to hear your whining rich hehe j/k ;)! |
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| richg101 |
oh rico... hear come the moans of dislike.... only jokin mate! :)
this is by far your best! sounds wicked at the mo:)
the drive is excellent! i like the joyenergizer zipping sound.. maybe add some efx to it so it sounds a little less like energizer tho. not too much to it tho!
beat is nice. maybe mirror something to it like a high drum to add some more punch? not sure.
there are my nit pickings. i love it and think it sounds great so far. i look forward to hearing the full version soon!
my version is nearing completion at the mo. ill send it to ya soon!
nice work mate
rich:) |
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| Dj Cola |
hey takker! :D
those hats are funky... but they sounds weird.. lower mids or highs on those to make them sound better with the tune?
the offbeat hat intro is to weird for me but im sure others like it.
trippy bassline! :wtf:
i like those shakers you have! or whatever they are called ^^
i would definatly add some snare loop in the back to speed things upp! also i would add some fast ass shakers/hats wich i think you have done.. or have you? dont hear them?
i would also try for a more driving/pumping sound in this tune just for the hell of it since this seems very driving for me!
quality man! keep it up, like your stuff but its short! make it longer :D and also make psytrance again. your stuff where trippy :).
maybe try for some psyrmx? |
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| walterpearce |
I really like this :)
I like the hats and the shaker, they make a good feel to the track...but i have to agree with the above :P A little more drive would be great (But thats like a personal preference more than production critique) |
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| Takkra |
whoahh thanks everyone for reviewing!! :D
and thank you rich for your moaning hehe:D looking forward to your version!! its the zipping sound is vanguard w/ the slide function on hehe:p.. Ill go for the drive guys put a bit ore energy in this :) think Ill have this done in a week or so :)! glad everyone liked it :D! |
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| TigerClaw |
| Sounds really good, You gota finish this. :) |
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| ASFSE |
hey
i just checked this out, it was pretty good, but as stated before, i think it's missing some drive. also, the little zippy-noise-thing, starts around 0:26 -- sounds out of place, imo. also the bassline sounds too busy...also i think you had too many breakdowns.
anyway, these are just my opinions. good job otherwise! |
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| Takkra |
Thanks for all the pointers!
bút according to my zipsoundloop creationtechniques, the zippy synth is on the right spot ;)! I double checked just to make sure.
I limited the number of breakdowns to those which I think were really nescessary.. and I did some playing around with the samples and stuff :).. check it out!! |
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| adam_rodriguez |
yeah i like the joyenergizer sounding thing..nice unique sounding bassline - think the kick could do with a bit more punch..nice percussion & claps coming in..sounds promising!
//adam |
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