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| infinity HiGH |
I was at a completely different board, boards.ign.com and someone posted a topic "What colour is the sky in your world?" Typical spam, but, being the trancEaddict that I am, I had to come up with something a litte "different" and not just reply with "blue". Here it is...tell me what you think;
The Blue Sky hovers above me, I see a Shining Star just before it Melts Into The Ocean. Hanging in the sky, motionless, is the Clear Blue Moon with a Violet Stream orbiting around it. Under my feet, lies Black Snow that has fallen from Outer Space. I feel my Lost Emotions Drifting Away, like Angel Dust. I am in a Universal Nation, with Seven Cities Above The Sky, the Wavebells ringing around me, creating a Cosmic Vibe. I am...in a TRANCE.
Improve it if you feel the need...I wrote it in about 15 minutes...while dead tired from work. A friend helped with one line...the Seven Cities Above The Sky one.. |
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| djSlain |
| that's a nifty piece ya got there. finally an original post |
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| liquidxxd |
| haha dope, i used to write stories in my aim info with trance songs in them, thats pretty sweet |
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| infinity HiGH |
:) Thanks...both of ya ;)
I didn't know if I should post this here...but, heh, getting a positive response |
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| eXeTik |
| Pfft, nice combinaton man... that truly represents Trance (and im not relaying only to the words, but to the whole agenda :)) |
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| M.A.R.K |
| quote: | Originally posted by infinity HiGH
I was at a completely different board, boards.ign.com and someone posted a topic "What colour is the sky in your world?" Typical spam, but, being the trancEaddict that I am, I had to come up with something a litte "different" and not just reply with "blue". Here it is...tell me what you think;
The Blue Sky hovers above me, I see a Shining Star just before it Melts Into The Ocean. Hanging in the sky, motionless, is the Clear Blue Moon with a Violet Stream orbiting around it. Under my feet, lies Black Snow that has fallen from Outer Space. I feel my Lost Emotions Drifting Away, like Angel Dust. I am in a Universal Nation, with Seven Cities Above The Sky, the Wavebells ringing around me, creating a Cosmic Vibe. I am...in a TRANCE.
Improve it if you feel the need...I wrote it in about 15 minutes...while dead tired from work. A friend helped with one line...the Seven Cities Above The Sky one.. |
wow thats really neat. you should make that your signature or something cuz its so cool. |
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| dOgMa55 |
That my friend, is absolutely beautiful. Im saving that line for future reference. I promise i won't claim i wrote it
':D :D |
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| Slapskin |
| nice piece of poetry there d00d. i see a shakespeare replication in you |
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| wookieslut |
| 'melts into the ocean'.....uh thats freaking awesome! |
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| Hell_Copter |
that's really nice m8
if that's what u r writing after u r tired from work
i can just imagine what u'd write when u r wide awake :) |
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| tranceaddict991 |
| nice use of all those classic anthems;) |
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| barryfigiel |
That's quite good actually... made me smile anyway!
lateRZ,
barryfigiel |
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