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Ryan - Suicide (preview) 4min 3 sec
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| Rayan |
Hi there!
long time no hearing (seen) :P
well.. this is a preview from one of my latest tracks! this tune means alot to me personal and the melody comes from the heart as always. this time even more!!!
people may think of me as an old-school trance producer / artist. But, I make my music my way, and others there way.
Remember that its not finnsih yet! so be a bit gentle :)
feedback is welcome:)
hope to get is signed asap!
enjoy the preview.
Press this to het the song! -<<<<<--
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| Eldritch |
Really good track, it has alot of energy. And there's always something happening which keeps it interesting. The lead synth and melody is amazing.
The clarinet/oboe or whatever at 1:38 I don't like. I think it just sounds cheesy.
Also I don't think the title really fits the track, it's really crude and ruins the beauty of the track, imo.
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| Rayan |
thanks!
Will see what I do about the title. But the Oboe thing do I really want to have there! but maybe I will try to change it out with a flute :D |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Hey Rayan,
Superb epic trancer. The title is way way of, suicide is just a dumb title for such a track. The leadsound is big mate, BIG. Love it, the melody is also huge. What I would change is the kick. This kind of track could use a bigger kick. And better percs and mixdown are also suggestions that you might want to look into ;) Extra percs will do a lot of good to the energy of the track mate!
The oboe even though cheesy is quite original. Looking forward to the finished article! |
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| Rayan |
hehe... Well! it was the first title that "pumped" up in my head :P will change it!
yeah. I will do alot more with the final mixsown and I will do something about that kick! percs will come to.
But right now. I feel like the kick is soft and nice. and that is somehting I like :P
but.. I make itfor ppl and me. I will se what I could do! |
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| d-jay MyTH |
I think this track is REALLY GOOD. I like the dolphin type noises in the breakdown and I think you should keep the oboe.
It ticks all the right boxes. Your melody is great. Your production is complex yet flows very well. Overall it sounds just as pro if not even more original than the Ace Da Brain stuff, which I'm guessing you were heavily influenced by.
Thanks very much for sharing it. It really is phenomenal. Its everything I love about trance.
Good luck with a release! |
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| Rayan |
| haha... I dont know who he is "Ace Da Brain". But thanks for that review :) |
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| bidor |
hey mate welcome back, superb track! i love the lead. i think though the sounds in the beginning get a bit to repetitive but that just my opinion. also please get rid of that horrible track title. it doesnt fit with such a good energetic trancer. i agree toss a heavier kick in the track, and dont forget to post the full version!:whip: good luck.
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| d-jay MyTH |
| quote: | Originally posted by Eldritch
Really good track, it has alot of energy. And there's always something happening which keeps it interesting. The lead synth and melody is amazing.
The clarinet/oboe or whatever at 1:38 I don't like. I think it just sounds cheesy.
Also I don't think the title really fits the track, it's really crude and ruins the beauty of the track, imo.
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What I'd like to hear, assuming this track has 2 breakdown/buildups, is for the first breakdown to have no oboe (i.e. remove it completely but keep the rest in) and for it to come in on the second breakdown instead.
I like it in a track when the 2nd breakdown/buildup adds something that what not in the first one. Makes the track progress more and makes the build up even better.
A good example is the Dutch Force remix of Rank 1 - Airwave. The first and second breakdowns/buildups were diff. Although I think they were put in the wrong way round (but that a separate matter)
I have listened to your track 4 times in a row now.
Thanks for sharing it.
EDIT* As it has dolphin like noises, I think you should call it 'Dolphin's tear' or 'Dolphin's cry' |
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| Rayan |
| quote: | | What I'd like to hear, assuming this track has 2 breakdown/buildups, is for the first breakdown to have no oboe (i.e. remove it completely but keep the rest in) and for it to come in on the second breakdown instead. I like it in a track when the 2nd breakdown/buildup adds something that what not in the first one. Makes the track progress more and makes the build up even better. |
damn! its like you have heard the whole song! I have done exactly! what you said there! :P
want me to uplade a part of the second buildup? or. shuld I tease you guys and not let you hear it.
| quote: | | EDIT* As it has dolphin like noises, I think you should call it 'Dolphin's tear' or 'Dolphin's cry' |
hmm... yeah. maybe I will adopt that title. was a really good title. |
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| d-jay MyTH |
| quote: | Originally posted by Rayan
haha... I dont know who he is "Ace Da Brain". But thanks for that review :) |
Seriously?
I will post a sample if I can find make/one. Okay?
EDIT* Okay here's a sample of Ace's Delight (Ace Da Brain)
Funnily enough people were criticising you calling your track 'suicide' and this one is called 'Mental Theme'! |
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| Rayan |
| thanks! but. not necessary:) |
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