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Yarune - Myst (wwwpreview)
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| Jay M |
Hi all,
Been a while since I posted anything on here. But since I always like to get some feedback from whatever part of the world, I thought it would be a good idea to get more of my track previews up here again.
I started creating this one about 10 months ago. It needed some serious rework in the summer, cause it was ugly and not finished hehe. I liked the melody so I put some effort to it to finish it. No real big deal but I will send this around a bit as backup for my more serious work, but I dont expect too much of this. Tho i'm curious what you all think of it.
Find a 112 kbps preview below:
Yarune - Myst
Made in Cubase SX 3 with vst's like v-station, superwave, hypersonic, ...
Thanks for any comments! |
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| Cetra³ |
I really like this track, sounds ing tops!
You need a slight bit of work on it, but I think what you've made so far is pretty wicked, way better than half the that's coming out these days.
The bassline is cool but I think it can be changed and the synths seem of low quality.
Anyways, keep up the good work! |
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| Goliath_10 |
| Thnx so much for this sample ;) will check it out soon. |
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| Haak |
| quote: | Originally posted by Goliath_10
Thnx so much for this sample ;) will check it out soon. |
do you ever give any actual feedback?
all i've ever see you post is that same line |
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| Goliath_10 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Haak
do you ever give any actual feedback?
all i've ever see you post is that same line |
Jepp. But verry often I forget to listen to much of it when I download it. Listen to them after a while. but then I forget to give feedbacks. But I try to be better on it. Have a great day. |
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| Davidsson |
| quote: | Originally posted by Haak
do you ever give any actual feedback?
all i've ever see you post is that same line |
yeah, what the is the point with saying thanks all the time when there is no feedback, so pointless and stupid.. |
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| Goliath_10 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Jay M
Hi all,
Been a while since I posted anything on here. But since I always like to get some feedback from whatever part of the world, I thought it would be a good idea to get more of my track previews up here again.
I started creating this one about 10 months ago. It needed some serious rework in the summer, cause it was ugly and not finished hehe. I liked the melody so I put some effort to it to finish it. No real big deal but I will send this around a bit as backup for my more serious work, but I dont expect too much of this. Tho i'm curious what you all think of it.
Find a 112 kbps preview below:
Yarune - Myst
Made in Cubase SX 3 with vst's like v-station, superwave, hypersonic, ...
Thanks for any comments! |
Hey Jay :) Really nice sample this Jay. Nice melody. Really fits together with the bass kick and stuff. Looking forward to hear a full version of this sometime. Have a great day. |
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| Jay M |
On topic please don't spam my little thread ;)
Cheers for opinions Goliath_10 and Cetra3! |
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| Goliath_10 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Jay M
On topic please don't spam my little thread ;)
Cheers for opinions Goliath_10 and Cetra3! |
Your welcome Jay ;) Take care Buddy :) |
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| Subtle |
listening:
nice track, very mixed sounds, but seems like i cant get quite hold of the bassline and the hook, seems a little blurry.. percussions are nice, but hard to judge as it is in the middle of the tune. and it sounds like the main theme of the track has yet to come. |
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| Jay M |
Hey Subtle thanks for posting. I completely see the point, as it is in the middle of the track. I think I will post a longer sample to clear the theme up a bit. The main theme is a relaxing one i think and it's more about the overall atmosphere, which could be seen as the hook itself. That's what I like about this track most, gives it an easy listening feel.
Cheers! Anyone else? |
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| Kris Xperiment |
Sounding very tops mate, still needs a tiny little bit of fleshing out huh, might sound bigger once it's in a ahigher bit rate and mastered :D
Other than that, top notch work as always.
Bassline is nice and flowy, intricate arping.
Cheers :D |
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