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Stan Void - Untitled [ melodic/driving progg ]
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| StanVoid |
should i finish this one? It's a blend of melodic and proggy, and I've worked on this for a while - now I'm not sure if I want to finish it. What do you guys think? Of the melody, of the element, of the whole feel the track gives off ...
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any feedback would be lovely!
cheers,
Stan. |
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| Christrance |
It's ..wonderfull...nice work Stan;)
Just a strong somatic sound song...good beat, uplifting , deep sound
Let it hear to Pascal
curious about the full 1 |
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| StanVoid |
| thanks for the replies so far guys, glad you're liking it! |
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| TOR |
| Lovely harmony, mate.. I'd up the volume of the pads a little bit, to make track more intense. Great stuff. |
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| DJ Kenosis |
listening ...
- kick could have a slight bit more punch (slightly higher note, shorten up decay and sustain, etc.) but otherwise does much better than I expected.
- the melody is fine for most of the sample, but it gets a bit old after about 2 minutes. You might use some perc loop work variation to help spice it up a bit. Another thing that could be useful is add a countermelody at higher frequencies ... something that could be done with Atmosphere or Synth1.
- for some reason the sounds don't appear quite as crisp and well separated as I would have thought for a 320 kbps sample. Maybe it's just my headphones deceiving me ... i don't know. Overall I think the eq balance is tilted too heavily in favor of the highs to the detriment of the lower frequencies. |
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| Four_On_Four-er |
Very repetitive, but beautiful! Sure there are some fidelity issues with the mixing, but overall it was an enjoyable listen. I managed to turn the repetition off by working tediously on my research paper for a few more paragraphs.
I like the bassline, and the kick fits the bassline, except there are some mid-high range inconsistency with the rest of the mix. It's actually not a big issue, really, and is what seperates a good mix from a mint mix. |
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| RickyM |
| I like it a lot, I think that if you can get the bassline to be more driving then this will be even better, I love the repetitiveness of the melody in this one, keep me updated on it :) |
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| pho mo |
Hi mate,
this sample is really beautiful, the feeling it imparts is amazing. Parts of it reminds me of M.O.R.P.H tracks, my <3. The vocal samples and little piano part are perfect.
Please finish it! |
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| lagrom12 |
other ppl mentioned it already and i agree, the melody is very repeative but in this one but thats good! sounds quality is clear and nice
with some more work this could be a very good track, so keep it up stan :) |
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| JakeC |
Finish this please! I want a copy to play out on Friday! :D :)
the only thing i can see is the level of the pads. Raise them up a bit. |
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| StanVoid |
really great feedback so far, guys, i appreciate that. Seems like the general thoughts are:
- repetitive, but in a good way :p
- needs stronger pads
- lacks some warmth in the frequency spectrum, too many highs - too hissy
well looks like i have my work cut out for me. :cool: |
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