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[ambient] 4am - I'll Drive You Home
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| mezzir |
man
this piece really just came to me. i'm definitely not done with it, but i got a solid 3 minutes of it and its my first venture into the genre really, so i'd love any/all feedback, whether its specific pointers or just comments
(right click-->save as...)
thanks :)
(ps sorry bout the kohuta, i don't got no webspace :(, link's kinda hard to find too, its in the upper right)
edit: link + song updated again
edit2: link+song updated once again, this should be the final edit |
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| Spacey Orange |
i'll check it out. i'm an ambient fan.
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i like it, but imo it could do without some fx/samples; sometimes less is more. |
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| Nemesis44 |
I have to ask this and I hope I'm not offending your creativity... but is there a problem with the file format or mp3 compression? Or is that the way it's supposed to be.
If it is meant to be like that then I am definately not feeling it. But to me it sounds more like the data is corrupted.
Hmmm, wait there is something going on in the back ground... I think it's the file that's got a problem.
Cheers
Nem |
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| mezzir |
the distortion, fuzz, and droning are all intentional
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| Nemesis44 |
| quote: | Originally posted by mezzir
the distortion, fuzz, and droning are all intentional
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Eeeek, I goes I put my foot right in it lol! ;) I hope I didn't offend. This track isn't really for me then and I don't have the knowledge on the genre to offer any constructive criticism.
Cheers
Nem |
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| mezzir |
| quote: | Originally posted by Nemesis44
Eeeek, I goes I put my foot right in it lol! ;) I hope I didn't offend. This track isn't really for me then and I don't have the knowledge on the genre to offer any constructive criticism.
Cheers
Nem |
lol no worries dude, i don't really listen to ambient either, just felt like writing some :p |
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| Spacey Orange |
| what software did you use? i've been thinking of producing sme ambient for some time now, but i am not sure what software is more appropriate for it. |
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| mezzir |
| quote: | Originally posted by Spacey Orange
what software did you use? i've been thinking of producing sme ambient for some time now, but i am not sure what software is more appropriate for it. |
lol this was entirely done with absynth, used through fruity loops :p
definitely not the best chocie, but ya know
it works :p
hopefully in the next few days i'll have 2 more cuts up. this song originally came to be for a video project my friend is working on, needed something atmosphereic, background stuff. and so the first half starts in a trainyard so i'ma be adding some fuxed samples of trains and to it, and extending the length to like 8 minutes. hopefully when i get that done, if the train doesn't sound that great, i'll have 2 versions, one thats what i imagined, and another that was used for his project
thanks for the comments everyone :) |
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| Glengie |
| Hey thats pretty good, I would sample between 1:15 and 1:45 and use that little melody to lead into something creative... something trancey... hehehe. |
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| mezzir |
holler, link updated with the full version for my friend's project
its some 9 odd minutes long now, give a listen :) |
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| Nemesis44 |
| quote: | Originally posted by mezzir
lol this was entirely done with absynth, used through fruity loops :p
definitely not the best chocie, but ya know
it works :p
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Not sure why that would be a worse choice than any other Softsynth and DAW?
That said, I actually enjoyed the full version more than the original posting. It's not would I would choose to listen to but was a nice break from the usual stuff here.
Good job!
Cheers
Nem |
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| mezzir |
| link updated one last time with the final version |
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