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Uplifting Tune - back online, pls have a look :)
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| Lightworks |
Hey peepz :)
After a long wait, this track is finally back online now. Here's the link to it, pls have a look and tell me what you think of it :
lightworks - forever (original mix)
Thx, and sorry for the wait :)
Wim @ LW |
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| DjArktik |
Listening right now...bass comes in kinda odd, but sounds good...(hmm i wonder where that synth is from :))...break is nice, and i like the melody :)...piano sounds kinda cheesy, but then the lead comes in to make up for it...buildup rules...and so on...another quality lightworks production :)
Gr8 track m8...keep it comin |
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| Lightworks |
thx for the comment mate :)
basslines are updated as requested ;)
cheers !
Wim @ LW |
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| dbl |
| sounds good as always... will hopefully have a new track online 2 soon |
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| Lightworks |
thx dbl
let me (read us) know about your new tune as well :)
take care!
Wim @ LW |
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| oDrori |
Wow, nice amount of emotions in that one !
2 Main things:
1) The main synth sounds kinda "Thin" for the melody it gets...
If ye know what I mean.
2) For me it's not your best work because it's just ANOTHER Lightworks quality work... Hoppe you take this as building critisizm, no offense. |
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| robstar |
| quote: | Originally posted by oDrori
Wow, nice amount of emotions in that one !
2 Main things:
1) The main synth sounds kinda "Thin" for the melody it gets...
If ye know what I mean.
2) For me it's not your best work because it's just ANOTHER Lightworks quality work... Hoppe you take this as building critisizm, no offense. |
I have to agree with oDrori here.
The main melody needs a phat synth :)
A also agree that this isnīt ur best work. I remember the first tune I downloaded from u , canīt remeber what itīs called but I remeber that it was a hell of a tune!
U got the gift u just need to spend more time on ur tunes.
I have a feeling u just spent a day or 2 on this one, right?
Listen to all the "proīs" songs and compare em with ur tracks, try to get the same soundquality.
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Spend more time on effects and stuff, try to use as little reeverb as possible but try to make it sound full and warm at the same time.
I have lots of problems with this my self!
Perfect Effect settings makes a big differance.
Cheers. :) |
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| Lightworks |
ok thx for your thoughts robstar :)
hmm well i did spend alot longer on it than just two days to get everything right, but i'll leave it at that... i'm a real amateur at this i know :)
see you later!
Wim @ LW |
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| trancenation |
| argh... i HATE mp3.com.. lemme go the painfull process again... argh.. gRRR :whip: :whip: :whip: |
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| Lightworks |
hehe, hey what's up buddy? do they ask your email again? :)
well just fill in ANYTHING you want, it doesn't matter what :) |
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| Lightworks |
didn't see your topic at first oDrori, cause robstar wrote such a big one :)
I know the main lead is a little thin, but it's to keep the track a little on the mellow side. i'll see if i can add some more things to it, but at the moment i'm pretty tired of working on it :) i'll get back to it if i can sometime later...
cheers, thx for your thoughts :)
Wim @ LW |
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| Alccode |
| quote: | Originally posted by robstar
The main melody needs a phat synth :)
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I very much agree with that. It is the only thing irking me about Forever - that it sounds a little "videogame"-ish if that makes sense. Just a little though - it is a very good track!
I recommend that you take on robstar's advice and add in a "phat synth" or something that brings out the lower frequencies. That way it will sound *even* better! It would very much be danceable then. Not that it isn't now, but it needs that spark. ;)
Excellent work, man, I hope you take this bit of criticism positively! |
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