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TA's Haiku Collection. (pg. 3)
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| Akridrot |
BUMP! Here's mine:
"where is my mommy?"
"i know where she is! let's go."
greatest day ever.
two hands to beg with
one hand to show me her age
no hands to suck dick
she hates eating eggs
but never protests when i
feed her my white yolk
i love sticky treats
recipe: young girl's pink ****
add one drop of lube
she's not a teen yet
let alone a grown woman
a kid is fine too |
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| Rose |
| Wow - I think you're taking this pedobear thing too far. |
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| Halcyon+On+On |
| Or not far enough. |
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| SYSTEM-J |
| At the risk of being Literature Fag, a proper haiku is not merely about the syllable count. The first and second lines should evoke single images, which are brought together as a concept in the final line. |
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| ziptnf |
| quote: | Originally posted by Rose
Wow - I think you're taking this pedobear thing too far. |
I think he's thinking it's funny because he's creating the illusion that he's a pedo, but in reality, he actually is a pedo. |
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| Akridrot |
| quote: | Originally posted by Halcyon+On+On
Or not far enough. |
This.
| quote: | Originally posted by ziptnf
I think he's thinking it's funny because he's creating the illusion that he's a pedo, but in reality, he actually is a pedo. |
Not this. |
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| Rose |
| quote: | Originally posted by ziptnf
I think he's thinking it's funny because he's creating the illusion that he's a pedo, but in reality, he actually is a pedo. |
Isn't he like 16 though? Whatever the case is, he's creepy and not funny. |
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| ziptnf |
| quote: | Originally posted by Akridrot
Not this. |
You're not? |
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| iTranscendence |
It is apparent
nothing new on internet
repost of repost |
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| Akridrot |
| quote: | Originally posted by SYSTEM-J
At the risk of being Literature Fag, a proper haiku is not merely about the syllable count. The first and second lines should evoke single images, which are brought together as a concept in the final line. |
Yeah, but I just wrote those in a few minutes to get some ideas out... just a throwaway exercise. I wanted to start understanding, creating, analyzing, critiquing and appreciating poetry on a higher level all of a sudden this morning (downloading great poems and looking at Amazon / Google).
Getting into Poetry is a bit difficult with all the CRAP ADVICE out there. I want to learn analysis and history as well. I'm thinking of reading critiques to get a good idea of how this all works.
I'm sure buying a few books on Poetics isn't going to be completely comprehensive but it's a start:
http://www.amazon.com/New-Princeton...52521493&sr=1-6
http://www.amazon.com/Teachers-Writ...52521493&sr=1-8
http://www.amazon.com/Poetic-Meter-...52521493&sr=1-9 |
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| Akridrot |
| quote: | Originally posted by Rose
Isn't he like 16 though? Whatever the case is, he's creepy and not funny. |
You should know I'm 5 years older than that, silly ****. Does that make this creepier and even less funny? Probably. I find this funny, though. So what you think. You don't have a sense of humor. Whatever the case is, get my age right. |
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| SYSTEM-J |
| I don't think it's possible to analyse poetry on anything but a "higher level", which is why it's the least popular form of literature. |
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