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new track, feedback appreciated :):)
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| djandymac |
| cheers buddy :) made my day that comment lol :) |
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| djandymac |
| anymore takers on this ? :) |
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| DJ Damerchi |
you obviously have talent with the synthesis and mixdown, but this track for me felt like an Asot filler tune. very proffessional sounding. I am not a fan of the 2 min + breakdowns unfortunately.
lush pads, some robert nickson/daniel kandi ish elements in there as well.
is this going on bonzai? |
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| djandymac |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ Damerchi
you obviously have talent with the synthesis and mixdown, but this track for me felt like an Asot filler tune. very proffessional sounding. I am not a fan of the 2 min + breakdowns unfortunately.
lush pads, some robert nickson/daniel kandi ish elements in there as well.
is this going on bonzai? |
yeh mate, well ive sent it to them, waiting for reply. cheers for feedback :) |
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| Theran |
Hey labelbuddy ;),
I really like your track! Good job!
Although I think you can make more out of the impact after the break. I was expecting a really big impact, and to be frankly, it wasn't quite there, if you know what I mean.
Other than that, great job !! |
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| Subtle |
Pads sounds dissonant, nice plinky piano, i like the panned hats or whatever.
The lead reminds me of something.. ooh got it on my tongue..
Yes... Airwave - Above The Sky
Fairly clean production, maybe you could add a clap on the beat ? |
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| danyoghia |
Very powerful and intense!
For the uplifting fan out there! I really liked it.
Very good work!
Dany |
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| djandymac |
| quote: | Originally posted by Theran
Hey labelbuddy ;),
I really like your track! Good job!
Although I think you can make more out of the impact after the break. I was expecting a really big impact, and to be frankly, it wasn't quite there, if you know what I mean.
Other than that, great job !! |
cheers buddy, yeh i think that is down to my lack of mastering skills because before i attempted to master it it sounded great when it kicked in but after my master attempt u can hardly hear the crash even tho i went back in to the project and turned it up some more. think ill get it mastered properly then see how it sounds.
@Subtle - cheers buddy, when i was making it it actually sounded familiar to me too lol but couldnt think what it sounded like.
@danyoghia - thanks mate :) |
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| Wilko |
Hi Andy. I hope i'm able to provide some constructive feedback.
I was impressed by the production value. You're clearly very talented, as this is very clean and well produced. It does however have a certain element of ASOT filler in it, as someone else pointed out. I honestly believe you've sold yourself a little short on this one, as my comments will hopefully unveil.
Just to note, I really don't like the bassline much at all. That's personal taste though, because it isn't poorly produced or bad.
The build is excellent.
The melody left me feeling a bit dissapointed, I wanted more from it and I think you could get a great deal more from it. The pads are brilliant and well EQ'd.
I feel like the percussion is just there to fill out the track, namely after the kick-out. I think you'd benefit a great deal from adding more depth into it by creating a more complex percussive rhythm.
Hope these comments are useful. |
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| djandymac |
| quote: | Originally posted by Wilko
Hi Andy. I hope i'm able to provide some constructive feedback.
I was impressed by the production value. You're clearly very talented, as this is very clean and well produced. It does however have a certain element of ASOT filler in it, as someone else pointed out. I honestly believe you've sold yourself a little short on this one, as my comments will hopefully unveil.
Just to note, I really don't like the bassline much at all. That's personal taste though, because it isn't poorly produced or bad.
The build is excellent.
The melody left me feeling a bit dissapointed, I wanted more from it and I think you could get a great deal more from it. The pads are brilliant and well EQ'd.
I feel like the percussion is just there to fill out the track, namely after the kick-out. I think you'd benefit a great deal from adding more depth into it by creating a more complex percussive rhythm.
Hope these comments are useful. |
cheers for the comments bud, im still working on it. so far ive added another bassline. the percussion is the thing i seem to lack with my tracks and i know it so im gettin a mate to help me in that area now so we will see what he comes up with. as for the melody, im happy with it and it, along with the other elements will sound much better once its mixed down and mastered properly. just hope theres a label interested when its done lol
cheers for listening :) |
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