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Unwritten Story - Evoking progressive trance @ 124bpm // 320k / 44kHz
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| Evolve140 |
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Quite possibly 98% done. I felt this one a lot and it really did kind of come together rather suddenly. Any thoughts or suggestions or feedback guys? Thanks as usual.
-Jesse |
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| SteelWolf |
| WOW - I really enjoy this track!!!! It sort of has a techy... tyler michaud type sound. This is perfect for me, as I start of playing house then trance so this is a great way to bridge the gap. WOuld you mind if I played this out? |
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| adi_hanson |
| Not a bad job with this one , not my style but i listened to it twice! |
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| Evolve140 |
Thanks guys, I added some FX and stuff and played with the arrangement. Do you like this new version better?
http://lego.zianet.com/tilda140/unwrittenstory2.mp3
Thanks again.
ps. Yeah let me finish it up and you can play it out I'm sure, unless something comes up. |
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| SteelWolf |
I like both... I like the hi hat pattern a bit more in version 2, its a little less harsh at the beginning, and teh FX are cool... but version one worked good too, it was a bit more minimal. I'm keepin both lol! They both progress very nicely. I'd keep version 1 as "Original Mix" and version 2 as "Alternative Mix".
I haven't heard anything from you yet but I really like this one!!!
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If you used that pad you have, and drop the kick for a few bars you could do like an intro mix deal too.
Anyways GREAT track. |
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| Evolve140 |
| Thanks man. I like the way the hihats "drop" and have that minimal effect, I actually want to keep everything from Track 2 except use that minimal effect from track 1 in any final version. I'm glad you like the track, let me see if I can work on it a little more! |
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| SteelWolf |
| Sweet, I look forward to hearing it! |
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| Evolve140 |
Thanks for spurring my thoughts about an intro... Spent quite a bit of time on that this time around. IMHO the intro is one of the hardest parts!
But here we go, ready to rock... waiting on final mastering... could take up to a week but we'll see. This could use some feedback though.
http://lego.zianet.com/tilda140/Jes...ten%20Story.mp3 |
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| SteelWolf |
Hey man, sorry about the long reply time, I've been in Rochester, MN at a conference.
Anyway, finally hearing this and its really good!
All of these versions are great and I'd play any one of them! You should master all of them and make it like a 3 track web EP or something. Dunno why I like this so much but its really effin good stuff. Sounds pretty damn good... I like how the synth comes in at the begining, The break is nice (311 ish), comes a bit late in the track but thats cool it builds loads of tension. Maybe do a longer version and repeat it? Something around like 9 mins or so (Thast just my opinion, I love lonnnng tracks).
Its interesting, all 3 versions work great on their own and are equally unique... yet they are similar as well. Great job you've done here mate! |
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| Fruitless |
Wow dude.. I just took a listen to the final make, pretty crazy to say the least, I'd like to buy it once it's mastered!
If i may however, I'd like to say the drumkit could use some quirky, fun, changes in the first couple of mins, but then again, it is your track, and it seems your doing a better job than I in making your track very danceable, the outro gave me a Deadmau5 kind of feeling, which reminded me of when Not Exactly was number one on beatport ehe, I also am into a different genres of EDM, but like I said, I'd buy it, and play it, change or no change
Also noticed the slowed tempo, was quite nice to hear as many producers feel the need to make a track at 128..
I may post what I'm working on once I'm done fiddling around, I decided a Less is More approach and it's pretty interesting to see what I was able to do with a single synth and a bassdrum, however I may end up adding other synths or samples to make it more danceable, but I might also leave it and let it be a track that can easily be dominated by "heavier" energetic tracks, that reminds me! I have quite a load of work to figure out
All the best! |
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| delux |
Holy crap, man! I just had to log in and say how much I liked these tracks. I am definitely giving them some play in the future! GREAT WORK!
-Andrew |
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