I effin LOVE THIS TRACK!!! reminds me of good old days back in ma home country, Mongolia. this track was MASSIVE HIT back in 2006 in Mongolia.
crowd goes crazy when the dj drop this...:whip:
DaveT
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Originally posted by gehzumteufel
You have Paul Van Dyk and Armin Van Buuren. The "von" (German) and "van" (Dutch) are not capitalized. :)
edit//I do understand that most people do not know this, so it is mostly as informational and future. :)
Originally posted by Techno_Twins
Ha ha, you're so grammatically correct!:toocool:
Well....grammatically correct or not, it just looks WEIRD!!! lol
At least it isn't mispelled. I am always amazed at how many flyers make it out with such easy to catch misspellings, sentences that seem to be missing words, punctuation errros, etc, etc. I see it way too often by just about every promoter out there. What's funny is that it seems like the bigger the event, the more likely there is gonna be an error on the flyer. It seems like the promoters get a company to design a super special flyer and when they receive the proof and it looks awesome, they are in such awe they seem to focus more on the design than the content of the flyer and easily miss it.
Hmmmm......lol, after just typing that, I looked over the flyer and....well, lol...
1. PERFORMANING??? What's that? never heard of it. lo
2. Some "who really cares?" punctuation issues..
- "worlds" should be "world's" - see it twice.
- "the world's No. 1 DJ Armin van Buuren &" should be "the world's No. 1 DJ, Armin van Buuren, &" (ok, I am being pretty anal with this one, lol)
3. "Armada records" should be "Armada Music"
4. And also might be another error...the whole last sentence, are ya intentionally saying, "Do not miss this rare chance to see the world's best...Roger Shah?" Or did ya mean more like, "Do not miss this rare chance to see one of the world's best...Roger Shah?"
Hehe...the trend continues. lol. Not complaining...I see it so often I that I consider it normal lol. Hell, I see two glaring mstakes on the Spundae anniversary flyer. LIKE GLARING. Wowzas....lol
It might be hard to tell from my constant unreadable posts, but I do have a background in journalism. My writing style is as stale as can be (why I did News more than anything else), but when I pay attention I could be a copy-editor. I was even hired at my old job as a writer, but had a background in video too so they moved me over to help head up the video team when it was formed...
rizo
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Originally posted by DaveT
- "the world's No. 1 DJ Armin van Buuren &" should be "the world's No. 1 DJ, Armin van Buuren, &" (ok, I am being pretty anal with this one, lol)
DJ Mag's No. 1 DJ... not world :rolleyes: Just another correction :p
DaveT
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Originally posted by rizo
DJ Mag's No. 1 DJ... not world :rolleyes: Just another correction :p
lol, that's not a grammar issue. That's just a choice of how to word it. :p
winston
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rizo
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Originally posted by DaveT
lol, that's not a grammar issue. That's just a choice of how to word it. :p
Said correction, nothing about grammar :p
blakh0rse
It has now turned into the Shah "flyer correction" thread, lol.
