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[Trance] Anakratis - LUX
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Anakratis
Hey guys, this is my newest song! Hope you like it! Please give me some feedback on what I should change. Hey, at 15, I'm still learning ;)

LUX (Rev023) by Anakratis

EDIT:

Rev-023

-Changed "Pluck" Sounds



Thanks!
Waza
your bass is a little muddy and to much reverb going through it.

but at 15 pretty good keep it up the good work
TranceLover007
Hi Anakratis,

Where is this track, I can not select it???.

Please re-post this again.
Anakratis
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Hi Anakratis,

Where is this track, I can not select it???.

Please re-post this again.


Sorry about this, I was updating the song :p
TranceLover007
Hi man,

For 15 this is fantastic, I like the atmosphere, tension and well coordinated drums with base. If any suggestion, I would experiment with more new sound for FX and solo on your synt. I'm impress.
Another grate "young" artist (producer). keep it rolling.

Future is bright for you.
Anakratis
New update (Rev 023). Hopefully sounds better :rolleyes:
Nightshift
did you delete it?
Anakratis
quote:
Originally posted by Nightshift
did you delete it?


No sorry, it just took about HALF-AN-HOUR to create "waveform"...
TranceLover007
Hi Anakratis,

Overall much better sound. Big step in right direction.
Couple of suggestion for you if you care:

- synt in 3:32 could sound more hmmmmm -different, is to bright (but not to bad)

- synt in 5:24 I would improve to be more smooth, deeper sound.

Try mixing vol level for different synts, that should improve overall quality of your track (cleaner sound structure).

I like and do not take this to personal if you don't like it.
This is only my 2 cents.
Anakratis
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Hi Anakratis,

Overall much better sound. Big step in right direction.
Couple of suggestion for you if you care:

- synt in 3:32 could sound more hmmmmm -different, is to bright (but not to bad)

- synt in 5:24 I would improve to be more smooth, deeper sound.

Try mixing vol level for different synts, that should improve overall quality of your track (cleaner sound structure).

I like and do not take this to personal if you don't like it.
This is only my 2 cents.


Thank you for the suggestions! I will definitely incorporate these into the track.

:toocool: :toocool: :toocool:

Nightshift
This is nice for being just 15 but nothing about this track stuck out for me. Pretty generic stuff, nothing too special. Mixing is okay, quite clunky and muddy though.

Keep workin at it though its good stuff, you're on the right track.

I see you use Ableton 8 as well so maybe a collaboration sometime?
Nightshift
p.s. im following u on soundcloud.
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