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[Full 320 Download] Simon Patterson - Thump (Immersiv's Lifter Mix - REVISION)
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novastorm
Just put up a downloadable revision taking into account all the valuable suggestions you guys put forward. Much happier with the sound of it now if I A/B it with the previous version, but would love some more feedback as my ears may have just gone stir-crazy - thanks in advance!

Revised version:
Simon Patterson - Thump (Immersiv's Lifter Mix - Revision) by immersiv

Version that's so totally last week:
Simon Patterson - Thump (Immersiv's Lifter Mix) by immersiv
msz
woah this great, im sure a lot of people would want to play this. sick bass, awesome breakdown.
Kysora
Nice to see something new from you. The bass sounds great, nice job getting it to come through the mix on this one.

Breakdown is gorgeous, awesome work man.
tehlord
Coolio

Tres coolio
Owsey2008
Nice job on keeping the elements true to the original. But I must admit that the original is not a track that I particularly enjoyed.

I think the kick and bass could maybe sit a bit tighter with each other. The drums let the intro down a bit IMO. I would add more variation.

Good energy in the track overall. I'm sure a lot of people will like this.
Nightshift
This is awesome cause i always wanted to hear Thump without the techno drop and this is pretty much it! the only feud i have is what Owsey said how the kick and bass should be tighter with each other, other than that this is really nice imo. good work!
TranceLover007
Well done my friend, beautiful sound and nice quality.

Great job man.
sleeping
nice interpretation! Really like what you did with it. Just one thing; The kick lacks a bit of power. It sounds a bit dull Just after the breakdown. Other then that, great job
novastorm
Ahh I love this place, a few sets of fresh ears are so great for picking out problems I'd stopped hearing. The kick and bassline could definitely get along better so I'll do some further EQ tweaking. Yeah the buildup was always my least favourite part of this (and unsurprisingly it's the section I spent the least time on..), I'll play with it some more to keep it fresher.

I'm tempted to throw in a mini-breakdown to introduce some melody and break up the build, but then once it drops back in just keep the bassline rolling flat on the tonic up until the break. I was never sure about the chord changes in the build and I'm liking them less and less the more I listen..

Thanks again and I'll upload a revised version asap!
mark_gg_daniels
Wow very hard track to remix as its so brillaint already.

Love the kick... and all the percussions. Really good sound. Bass is cool! Like that.... Maybe could be more meaty somehow.

I ways find it hard to pinpoint hings precisely... but maybe the eqing isnt perfect or levels, but I think it is slightly 'busy' or some instruments clashing with each other? It just sounds slightly distorted... and not as pritine as the original.

Hope that hasnt ruined your day!

mark_gg_daniels
I think i finishe writing prematurely... the break is awesome.Love that main synth lead thing, and the piano. ;. really go together well... stunning.

I know you didnt write the breakdown, but in my opinion its not difficult to make a really nice euphoric sounding break,,, there is more skill in getting the technical aspects right so good job.
sako487
Break is amazing, but i think the kick needs to be a lot more stronger, barely audible. and i have to agree with owen, the bass needs to be tighter "more pluckish". Keep working on this man I wanna see more
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