This is my second showing here on TA my last track got alot of good feedback and I was able to make some changes from that feedback and learn some new stuff.
This track has been done for about 2 months I just went and updated the sounds a little today. It still sounds "alright" to me if not a little dated since I started it and left it alone for 2 months. I think it needs some more warmth on the lower end.
Left comments on SC (which haven't shown up on teh embedded for some reason!?)
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zodionic
This is really good! I like your style
Owsey2008
I also left my thoughts on Soundcloud. Quite a chilled tune overall.
msz
very nice bro, enjoyed it. agree with you could step it up with a warmer bass always. keep up the good work.
EddieZilker
I definitely like this. Thought it could possibly use some more progression with the rhythmic elements, but you're definitely not suffering from the sophomore slump.
cryophonik
This is a very cool track with a very nice, darkish vibe to it. I generally prefer a little more variation in chord changes and I agree with Eddie that some more rhythmic variation would be nice, but the groove works pretty nicely, even at 7.5 minutes. The mix sounds good here and I don’t think that the bass/kick are lacking in warmth, but a little more probably wouldn’t hurt. Sounds great, though and I would have never guessed that this was just your second track here!
music2dance2
Some nice ideas, and alright track. I know what you mean about it dated in places but hey worth the effort to finish it. The melody is good.
Agreed on the warmer bass to.
Richard Butler
I like the laid back journey here and the atmosphere - one of those tracks I can just leave on in the background at work and not find irratating.
kevin shawn
Much appreciated on all these comments!! I agree that I do need more percussion, that seems to be an afterthought on my tracks lately. Really I need to polish these a little more before putting them online I guess, add the finishing touches FX and drum variations and what not.
Still very glad I received the comments that I did I will update this soon with more interesting percussion elements and drum variations along with some bassline changes
Everyday I learn a little more and it feels gooooood :)
darthseph
Good stuff dude! Very cool production. Excited to hear what else you are going to add becuase that definitely hits my ears as necessary. You've got everything for a good track there, but now it needs those little bits and pieces to get thrown in. Whether you try white noise use or emphasize percussive use, I'm pretty sure you're going to come out with something solid.
pho mo
Nice well mixed, understated and groovy track. Love how the kick and bass gel together and remain soft while punchy, that's something I've been trying to get going on my tracks. Only thing I thought sounded out of place was the kick rolls, a little dramatic for such a chilled track - there's many ways to introduce this kind of variation without using ye olde kick rolls
