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Magnetic Vision-When All Life Ends || Feedback Asked
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| Voci |
Hi guys,
from Hamburg i made this track (ah gettin tired now)
Please judge, its work in progress, but its shaping. Share your thoughts. If you don't like any modern style trance tracks, then don't bother. Else, hope you enjoy :)
Would love your feedback!
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| Atlantis-AR |
| I'm finding it hard to fault this technically, so great job on that! I just find the hat you introduce at 0:44 a bit on the loud side. Also everything sounds a bit compressed and 'noisy' somehow, like the instruments don't sound pure enough. Not sure how else to put it, but it doesn't sound that aesthetically pleasing. Musically I don't find it that interesting either, but I do think you might've overprocessed the sound with compression. |
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| Voci |
| quote: | Originally posted by Atlantis-AR
I'm finding it hard to fault this technically, so great job on that! I just find the hat you introduce at 0:44 a bit on the loud side. Also everything sounds a bit compressed and 'noisy' somehow, like the instruments don't sound pure enough. Not sure how else to put it, but it doesn't sound that aesthetically pleasing. Musically I don't find it that interesting either, but I do think you might've overprocessed the sound with compression. |
Hi Atlantis, the version that is on soundcloud at the moment was made and mixed with headphones. I have EQ-ed the track a bit better now. Subbass has improved a lot I think, and also the high-hats were lowered a bit.
Alongside some other changes... The build-up part and the breakdown are a bit too boring at the moment, will have to change some stuff there. I'm glad you think the technical aspect at least is good...
Thanks a lot as always Atlantis:) |
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| LiquidVision |
Ah ha, another fellow Vision :D
clicked the link but the page couldn't be found? |
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| LiquidVision |
Love it man :D
So many different elements that work really nicely together, great work mate seriously! |
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| Voci |
| lol thanks, didn't expect that ;) |
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| darthseph |
| Leaving the love on SC. OVerall its a nice track that suffers only from being two different concepts (The Piano and the Trance track). still you blend the line very well. |
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| Voci |
| quote: | Originally posted by darthseph
Leaving the love on SC. OVerall its a nice track that suffers only from being two different concepts (The Piano and the Trance track). still you blend the line very well. |
That is a lot of compliments at once... :) Thanks for that...
It still needs some work before I'd sent it out, if I do...:rolleyes:
Thanks a lot for listening anyway.:D |
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| Atlantis-AR |
| quote: | Originally posted by Voci
Hi Atlantis, the version that is on soundcloud at the moment was made and mixed with headphones. I have EQ-ed the track a bit better now. Subbass has improved a lot I think, and also the high-hats were lowered a bit.
Alongside some other changes... The build-up part and the breakdown are a bit too boring at the moment, will have to change some stuff there. I'm glad you think the technical aspect at least is good...
Thanks a lot as always Atlantis:) |
I've just grabbed the latest version (I think).
Again, technically it's fine, although I do find your main bass is learning towards the boomy side (i.e. too much low end), and the lead synth playing in the first half is a bit thin.
The bass in the breakdown is also leaning towards the loud side. Have checked this both on my monitors and headphones (not necessarily bad - just your vision). :)
At 4:11 things are getting far too compressed.
The drop after also doesn't sound very powerful. I know you've limited it up to commercial loudness but it could still sound softer in my opinion. |
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| Seandroid |
Wow man!
When all life ends... it sounding pretty good! ;)
Great track! |
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| Voci |
| quote: | Originally posted by Atlantis-AR
The bass in the breakdown is also leaning towards the loud side. Have checked this both on my monitors and headphones (not necessarily bad - just your vision). :) |
Noted.
Putting the sub-bass I always find difficult. I actually feel like in the breakdown the low-layer is rather soft. Perhaps the VERY low is too loud (as you described) and it should be EQ-ed a bit differently. Will have to look into it.
And yes, it was radically limited for loudness, I know its a sin... hope you forgive me.
Thanks for your input! |
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