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| Richard Butler |
I've totaly re-worked that cheesey pop / dance thang.
Any thoughts before I send this out? For example on the transitions.
http://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/pop-rascal2-03 |
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| G-Con |
| why dont you just delete the thread then? |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by G-Con
why dont you just delete the thread then? |
Ha ha, I'm a dope and didn't know how. Looks like SC is working now as Tehlord has managed to link it. SC homepage announcement today says there are known delay issues just now. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | [i][b]Originally posted by tehlord
Left some comments on teh Cloud.
Like it :) |
Cheers - yep - I think some chord layering towards the end would finnish this - tried to keep the rest fairly spartan - I noticed on a lot of my sons 'now' compilations that some big tracks have actualy not much going on in terms of leads and synths.
Whats the D Ramirez reference? Does he have a sh1t voice too!! |
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| tehlord |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Cheers - yep - I think some chord layering towards the end would finnish this - tried to keep the rest fairly spartan - I noticed on a lot of my sons 'now' compilations that some big tracks have actualy not much going on in terms of leads and synths.
Whats the D Ramirez reference? Does he have a sh1t voice too!! |
Just reminded me of D Ramirez in a mystical way.
When I said NO on teh cloud it was really in reference to the sound choice. Probably a little too far in the realms of pop/cheese. |
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| Mad for Brad |
The male vocal just ruins it for me. This sounds like something I would play if I were gay and I was partaking in a glory whole session with my bros just after we went shoe shopping. Are you gay ? Not that there is anything wrong with that but lately , you tracks just have this campy gay vibe to them.
I wouldn't call that pop at all. It is shoe shopping house. The blade reference was stupid and a great example of bad form. A random idea thrown in that adds nothing. |
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| Richard Butler |
Gays have great taste - just look at the appartments and clubs for one!
I might add some male grunts into it. |
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| Owsey2008 |
| That wasn't my favourite of yours, Rich. It sounded a bit too typical to me ears, and I really didn't like the New Order sample in this context. It's definitely well produced though. I don't have anything constructive to add simply because I haven't a clue when it comes to music like this. |
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| EddieZilker |
I really dig it. The high-end glitch caught me off guard and I'm not sure, apart from the satisfaction of knowing I can still hear in that register, that I like them all that well. Don't get me wrong. I do like them just because they do some sweet sh*t. They're just really freakin' high and freakin' loud.
Apart from that, however, this isn't a mix I would have expected from you and it shows a hell of a lot of diversity in your skills. Really, really nicely done. |
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| Beatflux |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mad for Brad
The blade reference was stupid and a great example of bad form. A random idea thrown in that adds nothing. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by EddieZilker
Apart from that, however, this isn't a mix I would have expected from you and it shows a hell of a lot of diversity in your skills. Really, really nicely done. |
Hey thanks - I was trying something a bit cheese commercail - but in the end I'm totaly unhappy with this so I've stripped out all the synths and am returning to my darker more 'serious' ( that sound pretentious) roots.
This music making is hard work when you want to leave the musical equivolent of 'Alien' (1) as your mark on the world - ah well, only another light years worth of practive and I might stand a chance |
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