Not really my thing. I could hook you up with that girl that posted here a couple of weeks ago saying she wanted to do vocals. I think this track suited for some spoken stuff with some sweet tape delay on there.
EddieZilker
Definitely want a copy of this when you're done with it. I'm voting spoken but the right singer could do a nice jazzy vox part to it and I wouldn't mind that, either.
theterran
Quite different. Pretty cool beat.
I'd vote spoken. Singing probably wouldn't fit with this.
And I don't know what to call it, but there's an FX at 2:20 that is way whack and ear-offending.
best of luck, will look forward to updated versions.
Richard Butler
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Originally posted by Storyteller
Not really my thing. I could hook you up with that girl that posted here a couple of weeks ago saying she wanted to do vocals. I think this track suited for some spoken stuff with some sweet tape delay on there.
That would be cool if you could. We are working on ideas in meantime.
Originally posted by EddieZilker
Definitely want a copy of this when you're done with it. I'm voting spoken but the right singer could do a nice jazzy vox part to it and I wouldn't mind that, either.
Cheers Man, I've posted new version now - really trying to bring it to finality.
Just vocals and perhaps a deadmau underlad somewhere with staggered difficult timing (difficult for me to play that is). Remind me you want a copy.
EddieZilker
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Originally posted by Richard Butler
Cheers Man, I've posted new version now - really trying to bring it to finality.
Nice work, sir. Serious growl on the synth work that fits in really well. Also the mix is nearly flawless - at least to my mind. The tune just sucked my attention away from what I was doing until it ended suddenly and somewhat less than ceremoniously.
Richard Butler
Cheers Ed.
Guys I am really more excited about this that anything else I've ever done and already have big label interest, so as I approach final tweaks I wouldn't mind some input.
Here we go my friend, something really different and refreshing from you --> Techno style with Industrial influence and cool House blend/touches - nicely done so far!!!
One thing, if I can, get this bass line and emphasize a bit more, actually little bit more than more lol - I'm looking for that initial massive groove hit when you start to listen to this track, sound with depth which will overwhelm you and make you move to this rhythm - really great so far man, really cool concept at this point, get it done and please let me know !!!
Cheers,
Darek
music2dance2
This sounds great really like the dark techno sound with some nice prog synths lines. The FX sound good nice and trippy. When it builds up just before the break, I think it would sound good to just kick back into the beat, nice and driving. The break could come later on, maybe?
Bass sounds great also.
Spoken word would go well with this dark track. Good luck with it dude.
Richard Butler
Darek and M2D2. ha you read my mind - before I read your comments this morning, I'd already made the bass a lot louder and was planning how to bring in some vox and extend the beat into the break.
I've made kick (needs some forensic eq still)n stuff more driving now too.
Planning some driving snare type rising rolls to really drive the end of the intro.
