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critique this amateur track (pg. 3)
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| Mr.Mystery |
| It hasn't actually been released yet, so... yeah... |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| Maybe my next demo will be a minute of a drum loop. And then I'll throw a hissy fit. |
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| Innocence Lost |
| Someone lock this , or better yet rubez delete your own thread. |
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| rubez |
eat a dick.
let's not delude yourselves you are making professional-level tracks or something because they are getting released on beatport.
reality check. you are bedroom producers.
i have less than a days experience in the "studio". i could probably get my drumloop into beatport :stongue: |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by rubez
reality check. you are bedroom producers.
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With any luck, one day you will be too. |
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| Innocence Lost |
| oh god, no wonder he's dumbest person to ever post in the core, i totally see it now. |
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| meriter |
this wasn't worth posting tbh
it's not a 'track' it's the first minute of what could be a mediocre track if it was leveled correctly |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by rubez
signed to a label :stongue:
do i need to point out the amount of e that gets signed to a "label" in the digital age?
my move?
how many sales has it got?
what revenue has it gathered in monetary sums?
what known djs have played it?
where can i buy a vinyl copy?
checkmate mf. |
What is wrong with you? You're like one of those asshats on Hell's Kitchen who can't cook, and then throw attitude around with everyone else. I'm a ty ty producer and I wouldn't post 32 bars or whatever of a boring drumloop, ask for critique, and then be a total douche to every single person who comments.
The thing about asking for a critique is that while all forms of art are personal, at the moment one puts it out into the world, one has to separate criticisms of the work from criticisms of you as a person.I don't know who you are as a person and frankly I don't care; you asked people who have more experience than you and know more than you about your track and everyone was honest about the work. You decided to start making this personal.
Why is that? What are you getting out of this? I'm not going to tell you what to do. I will make a suggestion though: until you're at a point where you can have people listen to something you make, and then respond to them with the understanding that everything they are saying is offering you a learning experience and not a personal attack, it will probably not be effective for you to ask for feedback. You're not alone in this; every artist in the world is exquisitely sensitive to criticism, and nobody is able to 100% separate from their work 100% of the time. Just saying that it might be more effective for you to try to be a little more separated, learn more (I learn stuff here every day I read it), and then when you do something really great you can justify your pride with the hard work and success you've achieved.
If you read the WIP thread you'll notice, especially in the last year or two, that there is a lot of reasoned, well-informed critique of both style and technique, usually along with instructions on what could work to fix them. And you'll also notice that with one or two glaring counterexamples, everyone responds with "Thanks, I didn't think of that" more or less. |
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| Andy28 |
| quote: | | Originally posted by rubez |
Nobody cares. |
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| Innocence Lost |
| Get the out/ |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by Innocence Lost
Get the out/ |
The irony that you're not recognizing your behaviour in this person is staggering. |
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