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Hi! Can i have your opinions again please?? (pg. 2)
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| Yevat |
| Thanx!! TranceManiac.. cool! ill have to spend longer times on them then :0) |
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| ADK |
ah, finally a more descent speed... 8,7k/s...
get back on this in about 15-20 minutes...
ADK |
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| Yevat |
| hi TranceManiac, since u see to be the only one that the file works for...LOL!... what else do i need to add to the song to make it better?... i'll take all the ideas i can get! |
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| ADK |
i listened it (twice)
i think this is quite a good song
not TOO good, but it's something i couldnt do
i think you should try to think of a very catch melody, not a five-second-melody that gets repeated all the time, but a bit longer, variation in tones, and tunes is important too, i think
oh yeah, after about 2 minutes, the musci completely stops, and after 10 seconds or so, a sort of little build-up begins
those 10 seconds are too long or too quiet, i dont know, but at first i thought i had put up the volume of my pcspeakers or something because i didnt hear anything
but it does have some dance-potential
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| Linx_da_cat |
| lol. okay okay, i'm gonna redownload it again...hehe. :) |
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| Yevat |
| thanx!! well as for the melody... the next song im gonna do (well remake) is an older song i did called "dawn" listen to the melody on the website ( http://www.envy.nu/musicyevat ) is that the kind of melody ure talking about?... and i understand about the silence part, ive been thinking that i should have made that shorter and hopped bits like that out... know what ya mean! thanx again!! :0) |
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| ADK |
| quote: | Originally posted by Yevat
thanx!! well as for the melody... the next song im gonna do (well remake) is an older song i did called "dawn" listen to the melody on the website ( http://www.envy.nu/musicyevat ) is that the kind of melody ure talking about?... and i understand about the silence part, ive been thinking that i should have made that shorter and hopped bits like that out... know what ya mean! thanx again!! :0) |
hmm, i dont know...
in 'dawn', you still have this little melody of about 8-10 tones that you keep repeating, sometimes a bit higher or lower, but it's still quite the same
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| Yevat |
| in that case, the next song, ill try and make it as different as possible! lol! ill try and make a unique melody which is different from all my others ;0) |
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| Fundamental |
I'm downloading it now 11 mins left to wait...
I wanna see if I can help. |
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| Fundamental |
Right i've listened to it twice and I have to say I quite like this one. Everything fits together nicely and the melody (although simple) is good. The only thing that I didn't like about it was the couple of silences through the song. Maybe they should be shorter or if there is some instrument(s) playing quietly thay should be made louder.
But all in all it's a nice piece of work!
What did you use to make this track? |
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| Yevat |
| thanx! well ure the second person to say something about the quiet bits... and after u ppl said it, ive listened and ure completelty right.. they need to go... im gonna get rid of them, and rebuild the mp3 and ill try and up the file again for ya's :0) and what i made it with, was Fruityloops3... i love that proggy! brb, fixing the silence! |
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| Yevat |
| great.... i got started, now i can stop in about with ! lol!! im like changing all the hats,hits, bass...and so on as well as the silences.... i knew this would happen... well, guess ull get this song later on then, not as soon as i intended!!!! |
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