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Hi! Can i have your opinions again please?? (pg. 3)
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| Linx_da_cat |
| heheh, okee. i look forward to hearing the new track. you can call it (whatever the name is) (take 2) hehehe. |
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| Yevat |
| lol! by the way, did the song ever work on ure machine, Lynx? |
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| Yevat |
JESUS CHRIST!!! I HATE MY COMPUTER!!!!! Everytime i tried to upload the ing thing, its cancelled itself off at about 80% and said "nope sorry cant upload... ure fault" !!!! ING THING!!!!! took almost 6 hours!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its up now!! ing hell... just click the same link again as it was before, different file... i took out the silences and crap, shanged the bass hats, and crap like that, and it now sounds more open and clearer... tell me if it is better...bye bye!!!
http://yevatmusic.webjump.com/Yevat...he%20Future.MP3 |
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| luckystrike |
nice song man!
although i think in the next track you make try to find more uniqe melody... but the song realy nice!
i make trackz to and i want to know - you said you use this program but you dont use it with some keybord?
i use "I - 3 keybord synthy by KORG" and also a modul by ROLAND - a groovbox ( mc - 508 )... |
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| Yevat |
| thanx! :) nope, only use the TS404 that comes with the program and the Pro-52 from Native Instruments.. only software VSTi instruments |
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| ADK |
ok, i heard you 2nd attempt
didnt hear too much of a difference
except for the quiet part, that became better
still not too bad
ADK |
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| Yevat |
well i ddnt actually change that much more then the silences, but if u listen to the first attempt and the second side by side, they have "sightley" different sounds to them... kinda hard to notice...but they are there! anyhow, thanx! :)
By the way, Lynx, did the file work this time?... i know the last time u tried to download it didnt like ure computer and didnt play, just wondering if it did this time. |
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| Peter Campbell |
Yevat I have just listen to your song , The songs sound image is produced nicely , your song writing needs a little work , I have read the posts about the parts were it gose silent , your on the right track and it think that you were trying to make a filter sweep in them parts , also the off beat bassline needs to play a cord progression that move with the melodi , Also you need to have more things happening not just a small fast one that you have , Trance music has sometimes 3 cords or melodies playing at onece and they are not all ways not them same notes . What you have got there is only a half finsihed track . What I would do is since that your melodi plays for 16 beats , have another one that plays for 32 over it than bring in some pads , pads are the carpet for a song that really fill in the gapes and gives it a nice feel , and how about a Bassline cord progerssion that moves with the melodi . I`am just trying to help out |
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| Yevat |
| hey DJ Pete!!! THANK U THANK U THANK U!!!! THATS EXACTALLY THE KINDA CRIZM I WANT!!! THANX!! IM GONNA TRY AND DO WHAT U SAID IN THE NEXT SONG... I UNDERSTAND WHA U MEAN BUT NEVER REALLY REALISED IT TILL NOW! :0) IM WORKIN ON THE NEW TRACK NOW, SHOULD BE DONE IN A COUPLE DAYS... THANX AGAIN! |
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| Yevat |
| oops... just noticed the caps!! lol!!! sorry! |
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| ADK |
yes, dj pete really seems to know something about making you own trance-music.
do u make music yourself, DJ pete?
ADK |
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| Yevat |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ Pete
it think that you were trying to make a filter sweep in them parts |
can ya tell me what a filter sweep is?...lol!! like Rank1 - Airwave? |
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