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| citric_acid |
I write a lot of poems and i wanted to hear wut people thought of them. here is one of them, i will put more up soon, im currently putting pictures with them... but tell me wutcha think
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| TranceSpeeder |
| i love it! :tongue2 |
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| Dj Dovla |
| there is a big thread here somewhere I started a while ago , search for it and you can read some of the stuff people wrote on here :D |
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| Orbital32 |
i like poems:
my little haiku:
I like lotsa porn
Never alone with your hand
Making porn is good |
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| twisted420 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Orbital32
i like poems:
my little haiku:
I like lotsa porn
Never alone with your hand
Making porn is good |
*snaps fingers* |
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| Vlad |
This is something I wrote:
Sleepless
Haunted by a memory of the past
I look to find a savior
The dark pain the memory brings
Is a deep scar that can’t be healed
Looking up at the dark ceiling
Hoping the agony would let go
The hand like branches on the wall
Make me feel I’m being watched
Looking out the clouded window
Seeing bright lights and a dark sky
Dying trees and run-down house
Puts my heart in a twisted beat
Blood starts rushing to my head
I lie here in my bed in an emotional panic
In a frantic state forever will be
Sleepless for eternity |
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| TranceSpeeder |
| quote: | Originally posted by Orbital32
i like poems:
my little haiku:
I like lotsa porn
Never alone with your hand
Making porn is good |
:clown: |
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| LinX |
| quote: | Originally posted by Vlad
This is something I wrote:
Sleepless
Haunted by a memory of the past
I look to find a savior
The dark pain the memory brings
Is a deep scar that can’t be healed
Looking up at the dark ceiling
Hoping the agony would let go
The hand like branches on the wall
Make me feel I’m being watched
Looking out the clouded window
Seeing bright lights and a dark sky
Dying trees and run-down house
Puts my heart in a twisted beat
Blood starts rushing to my head
I lie here in my bed in an emotional panic
In a frantic state forever will be
Sleepless for eternity |
i like, i like.. |
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| TranceSpeeder |
You Are My Sunshine
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away
The other nite, dear,
As I lay sleeping
I dreamed I held you in my arms.
When I awoke, dear,
I was mistaken
And I hung my head and cried.
You are my sunshine,
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away.
I'll always love you
And make you happy
If you will only say the same
But if you leave me
To love another
You'll regret it all some day;
You are my sunshine,
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away.
You told me once, dear
You really loved me
And no one else could come between
But now you've left me
And love another
You have shattered all my dreams;
You are my sunshine,
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away.
Louisiana my Louisiana
the place where I was borne.
White fields of cotton
-- green fields clover,
the best fishing
and long tall corn;
You are my sunshine,
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away.
Crawfish gumbo and jambalaya
the biggest shrimp and sugar cane,
the finest oysters
and sweet strawberries
from Toledo Bend to New Orleans;
You are my sunshine,
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away.
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| Clovis86 |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceSpeeder
You Are My Sunshine
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away
The other nite, dear,
As I lay sleeping
I dreamed I held you in my arms.
When I awoke, dear,
I was mistaken
And I hung my head and cried.
You are my sunshine,
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away.
I'll always love you
And make you happy
If you will only say the same
But if you leave me
To love another
You'll regret it all some day;
You are my sunshine,
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away.
You told me once, dear
You really loved me
And no one else could come between
But now you've left me
And love another
You have shattered all my dreams;
You are my sunshine,
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away.
Louisiana my Louisiana
the place where I was borne.
White fields of cotton
-- green fields clover,
the best fishing
and long tall corn;
You are my sunshine,
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away.
Crawfish gumbo and jambalaya
the biggest shrimp and sugar cane,
the finest oysters
and sweet strawberries
from Toledo Bend to New Orleans;
You are my sunshine,
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away.
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O' brother where ART THOU! :D |
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