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Peter Safranyos - Untitled (Original Mix)
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| ilovetrance18 |
hey guys,
here's a new tune from me, under my real name, heavily inspired by some Robert Nickson productions, so hope you like this one,
FINAL VERSION
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Peter Safranyos - Cloudland (sample)
thanks for listening to my music,
Peter:) |
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| Niklas Harding |
| quality melody, some work needs to be done tweaking sound wise.. but im sure it will get there! this sounds really good! |
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| FerryTayle |
The sound is great. The arrangement could be better i think.
I like the melo :)
With a little bit work on it, could be an awsome track ;)
Good mate :D |
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| M1cro5lave |
As always, the atmosphere is stunning. Amazing work!
I think the melody get's a little repetive, but of course, this is just short sample :) hopefully you will add some more changes in it, else it will turn out quite boring.
Nothing wrong with the kicks/hats, they actually sound very good.
The melody is what needs improvements imo. I think that's all.
It's not one of your better ones, but still very good! ;) |
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| pho mo |
Yup, this tune has a really nice feel about it. The break/build is fantastic, it works really well. IMO the bassline that comes in at 1:22 could be ever so slightly brighter, just a little bit!
The mixing on the whole is really excellent too, there's heaps of clarity and depth. Possibly it could be clearer around 2:05ish, sounds like there's a few melody lines all in the same octave.
It's a pretty short sample but keeps me coming back for more! Hopefully you're going to post the whole track fairly soon :) |
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| davidemonin |
Awesome track, Peter. One of your best so far imo. The melody and atmosphere is just amazing. Really am flying in the clouds with this one.;)
Make sure to add a little more variety, so the track does not sound the same from start to finish. Also, maybe have a slightly sharper and punchier kick. Other than that, really want the final version of it asap. Keep it up man. |
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| Sunquest |
hmm, ill start off with things i think should be fixed, kick needs louder, the background melody is too stereo, sounds too much in the background, overall maybe a little too many things going on (too many notes) at once... its kind of colliding,
now the good things :p :D
the percs and fx are excellent, structure is great, melody is good too :) very laid back and chilly, just my taste :)
so ya, just a couple mastering issues, no biggy
keep it up m8
peace out |
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| sooper |
Alright Pete!! This is great stuff!
Its so peaceful and uplifting. I love what you've done. I can't really suggest much. I'd like to hear a little more variation in the melody, as someone else suggested, but this is only a short sample, so nothing to be concerned about.
I'm looking forward to hearing the final product!
Keep up the fine work my friend,
Trev |
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| djrenco |
Hey Pete,
I really like what you have done. melody is ok, bass sounds a bit weak to me. but the synths are awesome!
looking forward to our collab:)
keep it up!
Renco |
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| Thunder5 |
Lets see..
Melody is nice...
just a few minor details you could take a look:
-Kick could be a little more punchy
-bassline is way too weak
Keep up the good work..
-Matti- |
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