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Peter Safranyos - Untitled (Original Mix) (pg. 4)
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| josh |
potential. Get the master done.
The kick can be more punchy.. Nice work man!
Cheers! |
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| Synchronix |
hey pete,
nice track buddy. i like the melody line. it's very flowing. the only improvement i can think of would be to add something extra-original, because you have a solid track at this point, but it doesn't sound like anything i haven't heard before. Add a couple things to give it a unique touch and you have a real winner on your hands! |
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| icexx |
i dont like it.
it just seems really amature to me, and the main melody at the start kinda made my head hurt as it got really annoying.
not makin fun of u or anything just letting you know what i thought when i heard it.
check out my track and lemme know what u think about it.
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...ID=2107943&q=hi |
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| tylerc |
sounds really good so far man, i like it. definitely has a pro sound. some vocals would go nice with this, but i think it would be really easy to overdo it and make this tune super cheesy, so be careful. the melody does get pretty repetitive after a while, but the vocals should help that. i might tweak that bass at 1:50 a lil to try and soften it, as its a little 'hard' i guess would be the word. i like the little fx thing before it comes in.
nice work. |
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| Peter K |
This track doesn't do it for me, I don't like that melody very much, but I guess its just a matter of taste.
A good production tho, keep it up. |
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| Mycron |
| quote: | Originally posted by kewlness
things to work on:
right now, the kick is not punchy... it has this trailing bass that makes it lose it's punch...
the bass is muddy to my ears (not the one that comes in at 1:50)
things i enjoyed:
the track is dreamy and atmospheric... the melody is hypnotic and beautiful
the track flows well....
melodic components are complimenting each other well
great track :) |
thanks for the kind words, jean-luc,
your suggestions are always much appreciated, mate:)
i'm gonna do some final tweak and eqing on the bass,
cheers,
Peter:) |
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| Jay M |
You know what i think of this, pure quality! Let's hope the vocals are in there soon, and I'll be delivering a (hopefully) worthy remix ;)
Keep m coming! |
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| Expher |
Sounds pretty neat, it has a nice feeling - kinda euforia. I will write down some dots that might be to your help...
- A more punchy bass would be great
- Do not forget postwork on this one, a good mastering's essential
- Spontainiously overall good synths
- Strings/pad could be improved
- I do not like the delay on the open hihat
- Cool lead, sounds pretty "new"
- Great work :happy2: |
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| Mycron |
| quote: | Originally posted by Expher
Sounds pretty neat, it has a nice feeling - kinda euforia. I will write down some dots that might be to your help...
- A more punchy bass would be great
- Do not forget postwork on this one, a good mastering's essential
- Spontainiously overall good synths
- Strings/pad could be improved
- I do not like the delay on the open hihat
- Cool lead, sounds pretty "new"
- Great work :happy2: |
thanks, Johan:)
i will make some fixes on the pads, just bring it a bit more upfront, and will take a look on that hihat, i like it, though,
anyway, thanks for your comment! |
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| krivi |
this is great stuff man...
i would just work on variations through the track and i think kick is weak...try to avoid equalisation of open hihat... |
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| Mycron |
| quote: | Originally posted by krivi
this is great stuff man...
i would just work on variations through the track and i think kick is weak...try to avoid equalisation of open hihat... |
thanks krivi,
i like that kick, but yeah its true i should make it more sharper, punchier, and cut down some bass of it, hope it will helps,
about the open hihat, i pretty much like it, but maybe too much delay on it yeah, will be fixed soon,
thanks |
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| Blue Sky 99 |
Hi Peter,
First, nice track! I listened to the sample a couple of times and I kept on liking it so that's a good thing! The only thing that started to bother me was that the melody became to repetive ... but that is already said a few times before me :)
Overall this track has some potential I think!
Great work!
I still had a question about the vocal remix: will the vocals be male or female? |
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