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Peter Safranyos - Untitled (Original Mix) (pg. 5)
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| DJFreaq |
The hats sound better than other stuff I've heard today. Kick sounds alright.
I like your melodies with the most present synth. The string accomp sounds nice too. I like how this track flows.
Not sure if I like your bass. Sounds like a bassline I'd make, which IMO isn't very good usually :wtf:
Work on your bass. I like everything in the song practically, except my bass, probably cuz I'm getting flashbacks and scaring myself.
Good work overal man, I really like it. KEEEEP ITT TUPPP!:crazy: |
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| 2)Ser |
| i didnt quite feel any good progression in the beginning. and also the bass felt a little too dry to me. a really nice abstract sounding song though. |
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| icexx |
i dont know why u guys are lying to this guy and saying his track is pure quality. stop lying to this guy.
he needs to work on his production.
ill give it to you like any record label will tell you.
this track is basically useless and it sounds amature. im not gonna be like the rest of ur buddys here and say is quality when its garbage.
just keep producing and make something better and more pro.
gl |
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| EtherealSL |
the lead synth is definately very cool sounding
but the melody bothers me after a while... like others have said: too repitative
bass volumes can be bumped up a lot... track is lacking on lowend
would be cool to see how this turns out :) |
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| teknasia |
another well-produced piece of art of the hungarianboy! :p
really nice track m8! can't wait for the vocals :)
the break is soooo freakin' dreamy!! Your synths are also very clear! maybe you could add a mid-freq synth to fill it up? dunno :)
Made this with reason???
cheerz m8! |
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| Timothy |
| This track is really great. The melodies are nice. Maybe work a bit on your bass. Adding more percussions wouldn't be a bad idea imo. Nice FX you made :) |
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| Subtle |
u definitely got your own style alright...
this starts out much better than your other track, greater percussions and drive here.. break, i like the notes of the basslines, some more low end could do, maybe.. after the break, the kick doesnt feel right.. or the low freq or something like that.. sounds alright, but u need to work on your basslines dood.. ;) |
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| DJ KaRiM NeT |
Awesome !
Finish this and it will be a hit ;) |
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| Mycron |
thanks a lot for the comments,
anyway i updated the track with better bassline and lead,
you can check out the updated version, here
Peter Safranyos - Cloudland (sample)
cheers,
Peter:) |
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| RickyM |
Hey Man
Nice tune you got here - although I find the hi-hats strange a bit. SOunds are nice, but I think it could do with a bit more bass, to give the song a wider sound.
Melody is nice, I wouldn't say it bored me, but it's nothing I haven't heard before.
Production is good and clear, overall great tune. |
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| djrenco |
sounds really good my friend!! love the melodies! you are improving a lot:D but you still have to work on the bassline man... add some more low frequenties, eq it a little:D
cheers,
Renco |
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