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Danny c - vapourise [PSY style TRANCE] feedback needed
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| dannyc |
hi guys this is one of my latest tracks alot more experimental than my usual sound. think theres alot of psy style john oo fleming influnce here.
see what you's think all feedback and constructive critisim welcome as always ;)
heres the link:
http://www.dance-industries.com/view_track.php?ID=10982 |
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| bricky |
Gotta say danny: Well done man.
I was only gonna just listen to this (with the pop-up player thing), but i just had to download it. It'll be on my playlist for a while too.
Can't offer alot in the way of constructive criticism really. I think maybe you overuse the pink noise and that rising/falling kinda engine startup sound (I've really gotta work on my musical vocab :P ), but otherwise this is a thoroughly enjoyable tune.
If you do some more work on this, could you post it up or pm me? I'd love to use it in a mix or two.
Well done again man. |
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| thoughtlessjex |
There's a weird stop in the music early on in the track. It sounds to me like a CD skip. I tried to seek back to it but I couldn't find it. I dunno what it is.
Pretty good. I've gotta agree with bricky though on the white nose. Other than that, I don't have much to say about it. |
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| Axolotyl |
I wouldnt really call this psytrance. Its far more prog than psy. Reminds me a bit of some of the stuff on J00F actually. Might want to consider sending it there if your considering labels.
Pretty damn good production wise. The structure is very progressive too which seems to work well. Theres some nice percussion elements woven throughout it too. Those bladerunner style pads are sensational and give the track a very dark feel.
I feel it gets a bit messy in the highs near the end though(around the 8 min mark)
Do you mind giving a rundown of the synths you used to create this? I'm curious... the programming is very well done =) |
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| Blue Frequency |
| powerful :toothless |
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| Sparkunian |
Simple and pretty.:D
Soundtrack atmosphere.Good production but too mellow for my taste...
Nice work ;) |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hi,
Productions sounds really sweet, I concur, this sound smore progressive than psy :).
I like those kinda vangelis trump pads :).
In overall, this is really good, I was expecting some more action but that's just me good work mate ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| Mane |
hey mate, its been long time since i heard something from you :p
nice start, that clap at 50 s maybe you could add more mid, i like whole structure, for me its more psy than prog actually, i like fxs , and that "oh" at 4 min its great ;) keep it up :) |
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| kaymak |
psy / prog. doesnt really matter, its typical Danny C,
you've done alot more work on it since the last time you sent it to me,
Well done bro, keep churning them out |
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| dannyc |
bricky: thanks for listening glad you liked the tune, this is completetly finished thou man, i'm not doing anymore work on this have moved onto my next project. the exessive use of white noise was intentional to create a certain atmosphere hence the reason i called it vapourise. ;) if theres something in particular you would like me to change i could do you a special edit so you can stick it in your mixes :)
thoughtlessjex: thanks for feedback man :)
axolotyl: man thats fantastic that you felt this reminded you of joof stuff it just so happens i kinda got some inspiration froma great joof track LSG netherworld oliver prime remix you'll hear from this his over use of white noise which i loved :whip:
as far as the synths are concerned they're all reason 3 presets just worked them myself ya know. i'm only producing little over a year so my synth work has pro as i would like, that will take time i guess.
do you really think this could be good enough for joof? dont know if its psy enough for them. anyway i sent it of to them yesterday hope for the best. :)
any other labels you could suggest other than joof??
blue frequency: thanks mate :)
sparkunian: interesting you noticed the soundtrack type feel to it as this would be my other main musical influences. thanks mate :D
kopi_luwak: thanks for postive feedback :)
mane: glad you liked this i think we have similar taste, thanks for the tips also. :)
kaymak: my main man and fellow irish producer thanks for continued support and keep up the good work yourself, be seeing you soon ;)
great response all in all was'nt expecting this hopefully joof will like it as much or another record label. i'm dying to get my first release to reach that milestone.
anyone else got any feedback on it???? |
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| dj_kane |
| very nice production. only fault is the shakers, they lean too much to the right which doesn't balance the track. the synths are superb just wondering what reason presets u used and what keyboard u r using? |
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| Axolotyl |
| quote: | Originally posted by dannyc
do you really think this could be good enough for joof? dont know if its psy enough for them. anyway i sent it of to them yesterday hope for the best. :)
any other labels you could suggest other than joof??
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Only one way to find out I guess...
Maybe try some psytrance progressive labels like Sinn Tec, Digital Structures or Spiral Trax too. Good luck mate =) |
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