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Static Blue - some new tracks
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| staticblue |
Hi everyone,
During july I've been working on some new original tracks. I'm now looking for feedback on them and wondering how you guys think I could improve them :)
Static Blue - Cloudchaser
Static Blue - Heaven's Open
Static Blue - Summer Memories
New tracks
peace,
Jon |
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| DJ LEAD |
One upload 3 songs, 3 very good songs man !!!! :) This is also my style !!!! Everything is perfect :)
Many greetz from Poland !!!! |
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| Sunclyder |
Hej Dude :)
"Cloudchaser"
Heaven's Open"
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"Summer Memories"
This are very amazing tracks :)
mind feelings are fantastic
greattttttttt :eyes:
Jon this is beauty job :D
Greetings
Keep it Up
Sunclyder |
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| Goliath_10 |
| quote: | Originally posted by staticblue
Hi everyone,
During july I've been working on some new original tracks. I'm now looking for feedback on them and wondering how you guys think I could improve them :)
Static Blue - Cloudchaser
Static Blue - Heaven's Open
Static Blue - Summer Memories
New tracks
peace,
Jon |
Awesome Jon :D Thnx so much for the shares on this ones. Looking forward to hear them, Will give you review later on Msn Buddy :) |
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| lagrom12 |
summer memories is the best of them overall sounding. i woukd concentrate on it first. solid sound and oldschool lead with the choirpads sounds very good. love it.
in Heaven's Open i think the kick is too weak after the break. but before it sounds great. maybe u add some more deep / atmosphere to it too to make it more complex and intersting.
the beginning of cloudchaser is a bit boring, but the climax of the break is awesome, really like it. u should make the beginning more intersting. maybe u add your "a blue'ish guitar melodie" in the break, this could really kick ass :)
but when all play together later it sounds good |
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| The Drow |
Starchaser:
Nice bass.
Cool arp at the begining.
The pads are nice.
The break comes... No variation at all.
It's getting kinda boring.
Cool second pad.
I think I hear the main lead.
The track is really busy with plucked synths so I can't tell the difference.
The melody is ok.
You realy lack precussions.
Nothing groundbreaking or interesting.
4/10.
Heaven's Open:
Nice plucked melody.
Nothing interesting goes on on the buildup.
This one has a better melody.
The break is really long.
4/10
Summer Memories:
This is better. The bass is much more driving here.
But I hear the same precussion line.
Well you used the same sounds again. Work on your programming a bit more.
Nice melody.
Oh I knew that a piano is coming. Not half bad.
But the riff should be much longer. Add chords, don't just use single notes.
The lead melody is basically the same as the buildup riff.
Oh that saw isn't that bad.
6/10
Sorry I really didn't enjoy listening to this.
It's not interesting enough. |
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| Ryarni |
OVER ANALYSIS ^^^
Anyway, I really should check out some of your previous stuff, I love all three of these, brilliant uplifting stuff, just what I like!:D :D :D |
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| staticblue |
| thanks for the feedback guys :) |
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| Mycron |
hi mate,
really nice new uplifting tracks from you, my favourite is definitely Summer Memories out of these three tracks, but i don't think you will have problems to sign all of them to some nice labels, if that's your plan:)
i wish you good luck with them:) |
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| Subtle |
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| music2dance2 |
| Hi, Cloudchaser is a nice track i like the chord progression its different which makes it stand out. I liked heavens open the most, the build up is good in the break. Summer memories is alright, these 3 tracks are different to your other stuff which is a good thing as its showing a different type of sound form you, they have a happy sound to them. I much prefered some of your other stuf but thats just my preference not saying these arent good solid tracks. The production is good, and you could get these signed, they are nice melodic tunes. If this is the type of sound you are going for thats cool, but you could spice the tracks up to give them a bit more groove maybe add another synth or melody in the backgroud. Thanks for sharing mate. |
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| Stino |
| i think you really should explore new sounds dude....its all too generic imo |
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