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Finished, pending a good rest and some feedback... (pg. 2)
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| msz |
| this is sounding good, would like to hear the track when finished, pm me a link when you have it complete ;) |
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| owien |
| sounds like you have a idea on the go here just needs more work and finishing off really |
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| Evolve140 |
| Yeah, I need a track to "come out" with to establish my name. I've been working on a lot of different tunes but this one I think would actually make people go wild in a club. Wish me luck on finishing it today. |
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| owien |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
Yeah, I need a track to "come out" with to establish my name. I've been working on a lot of different tunes but this one I think would actually make people go wild in a club. Wish me luck on finishing it today. |
good luck man the sound was clean so you wont have any worrys there i dont think |
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| Richard Butler |
Yea I can imagine this being one of those Benni Bennasi type numbers that people go wild to. Got an original leed sound and melody here.
Let me know when finished if you want. |
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| TranceLover007 |
This is a great start with tons of possibilities man. Really dynamic rhythm with some solid character in it already.
Do it Evolve140 and finish it, love to listen the final version (has nice grooving sound man).
It may be your time Evolve140, so keep plugging that music away and good thinks will happen. |
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| Evolve140 |
http://soundcloud.com/tilda140/updates
Here we go guys, this gets the ladies WET on the dance floor. Also thank you for the nice comments trancelover, let's see if you like the direction I've taken it in updates.mp3 |
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| TranceLover007 |
| No problem man, I'm on it. |
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| TranceLover007 |
I love it man.
:toocool::toocool::toocool::toocool::toocool: |
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| beach1 |
| Could you upload the latest one onto zshare or zippyshare? My PC has problems streaming sound. I can't promise great criticism cause I'm no expert, but I'd like to hear it anyway. |
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| Evolve140 |
http://soundcloud.com/tilda140/updates4
Pretty much finished. The intro is the last part I have to fix up but everything else is pretty much done. Had someone mention it's a little dry, to play around with delay more around 4:00 or so, things like that. Good to know what you think about that as well. Thanks,
Jesse |
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| darthseph |
Intro does indeed need polishing/work. I'm not convinced its anything more than a bland continuation of almost the entire beat loop. It's too long with little actually going on imo. Perhaps stripping it apart a bit more would help. Dunno though.
The track suffers during the 200 - 2:30 mark of sounding overly continuous. Again, it seems the front half needs some reconstruction. Before you have the synth line drop in.
The synths are both clean and dirty. They definitely develop the flavor in an avenue I didn't originally expect.
The 5:15 break is a bit abrupt, perhaps add in some fx? Noting on that break, make that FX sweep back in more punchy! It will help add tension to the re-ignition on the back section of the track.
The end could use some minor reworking as well. It feels like it suddenly just drops off. Kind of a jerky build down I feel.
Honestly, I know it sounds like a lot in that, but its really minor reworks. The core of your track is great, and once you get the front and some minor construction type stuff nailed down, I'd suggest shopping it to some labels just for the interest. You never know! |
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