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Finished, pending a good rest and some feedback...
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| Evolve140 |
http://soundcloud.com/tilda140/jammies
Sorry about that. The network admin for that server seems to be blocking European access... what an idiot. Soundcloud should work tho. Thanks for the heads up. |
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| tehlord |
Solid start, I like the vowel usage.
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| Evolve140 |
| Cool, yeah, should be nicer once I get a chord progression. I was hoping it wouldn't muddy up the bottom end. Hope it sounds OK on the low end, with some snap. You get a good "groove" locked in, and does it sound OK loud? Thanks again. |
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| Owsey2008 |
The kick seems a bit too clicky for me. The bass isn't bad, but maybe have a transistion before it comes in? Of course I can't tell you how to make your music, but these are just some ideas.
Keep working on it. |
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| TranceLover007 |
Solid effort men. Well mixed electo/house/minimum trance.
Nice clean sound with good character build in it already.
Keep working on it man, you really can get strong and solid track out of it. |
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| Evolve140 |
| Thanks guys, going to pick up a big bag of weed this afternoon so I can finish this one tonight. Other feedback is welcome. |
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| tehlord |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
Cool, yeah, should be nicer once I get a chord progression. I was hoping it wouldn't muddy up the bottom end. Hope it sounds OK on the low end, with some snap. You get a good "groove" locked in, and does it sound OK loud? Thanks again. |
I've only managed to listen to it on earbuds at work but they're usually quite ruthless at revealing a muddy bottom ;)
Sounds fine to me. |
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| darthseph |
| Low end is clean on my rig at home. I don't notice any glaring mix failure. i will be interested in seeing it develop into a full track, and where you take the main melodies in it at this point. |
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| Evolve140 |
| Awesome, I'm glad to hear that. I've had some issues getting a good low end. Anyone else have feedback before I start working on it again? |
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