Yeah, we had a listen and decided that we would pull the square from the 2nd drop as it was just messy and clashes both rythmically and in the sonic sense.
Personally I like the energy that this seems to pack although that could be my biased ears and is also subject to preference.
We do appreciate you guys taking the time to listen and comment though as it has been a useful tool in the process.
Cheers
Nem
EddieZilker
Ah, I've arrived in the wrong place, he thought to himself as he entered the club, figures bouncing in the smoke through the darkly lit hallway ahead of him. The song broke and he emerged next to a recessed bar, a man vomiting on the carpet, fifteen feet down, and otherwise unnoticed in the pox of scantily clad women, bouncing with their drinks to the rhythm.
The song broke, again, descending into a circle of fifths arpeggiated with a blip which suspended on a single note as the tune relaunched into the palpable rhythm on the drop.
ing ace, gents.
Seandroid
quote:
Originally posted by EddieZilker Ah, I've arrived in the wrong place, he thought to himself as he entered the club, figures bouncing in the smoke through the darkly lit hallway ahead of him. The song broke and he emerged next to a recessed bar, a man vomiting on the carpet, fifteen feet down, and otherwise unnoticed in the pox of scantily clad women, bouncing with their drinks to the rhythm.
The song broke, again, descending into a circle of fifths arpeggiated with a blip which suspended on a single note as the tune relaunched into the palpable rhythm on the drop.
ing ace, gents.
How come nobody writes visuals for my tracks!?
:p
EddieZilker
quote:
Originally posted by Seandroid
How come nobody writes visuals for my tracks!?
:p
I'm actually thinking of writing some fiction involving EDM - It's so ing ripe with stories, as it is, and this tune felt right for some practice. :D
Seandroid
quote:
Originally posted by EddieZilker
I'm actually thinking of writing some fiction involving EDM - It's so ing ripe with stories, as it is, and this tune felt right for some practice. :D
That is a seriously unique idea, it's kind of like applying a sort of lyrical aspect to a track, telling a story the same way a lyricist would just not in the same fashion.
Cool :)
Richard Butler
quote:
Originally posted by EddieZilker Ah, I've arrived in the wrong place, he thought to himself as he entered the club, figures bouncing in the smoke through the darkly lit hallway ahead of him. The song broke and he emerged next to a recessed bar, a man vomiting on the carpet, fifteen feet down, and otherwise unnoticed in the pox of scantily clad women, bouncing with their drinks to the rhythm.
The song broke, again, descending into a circle of fifths arpeggiated with a blip which suspended on a single note as the tune relaunched into the palpable rhythm on the drop.
ing ace, gents.
You Sir are a poet!
Glad our little ditty inspired your prose.
The final version will be posted shortly with a cleaner last drop for anyone interested.
Cheers
tehlord
Really very, very good.
That is all.
Richard Butler
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Originally posted by tehlord
Really very, very good.
That is all.
Now I'm confused - in your previous feedback you said not gelling for you and it was like a perc buss was muted in error and kick was late.
After your post Nem sent me the bass he'd previously superimposed over the orignal track on sc - maybe mixing them in the one DAW helped.
tehlord
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Now I'm confused - in your previous feedback you said not gelling for you and it was like a perc buss was muted in error and kick was late.
After your post New send me the bass he'd previously superimposed over the orignal track on sc - maybe mixing them in helped.
I listened to the orignal again as well and it didn't seem as thin this time, perhaps it was my PC speakers at home that ruined it last time.
I always listen to the most recent version first as I don't get coloured by my precious opinions that way.
If it were my track i'd still beef up the kick and add some grooved percs, but it ain't my track :p
That main, monotonous (in a good way) lead is taking over the duties a bit now as well and the reverb automating in works superbly. It's also differently paced now than the original.
Dunno, just worked for me this time!
Richard Butler
Well we think it's now done - made a lot of subblte alterations today.
Hopefuly the last drop works now?
Tehlord - no worries, yeah yesterdays version was worked on a lot so that's probably why you noticed the difference, and todays hopefuly has nailed it perhaps!
Wife has banned me from studio for the next couple of days, damn I'll be needing a fix come the 27th.
Seandroid
I'm kind of yearning for a "WSHHHHHHHHHHHYOU THINK I'M FUNNY? *stop* PSSSEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWW"
I hope you understand what I mean :P
Richard Butler
quote:
Originally posted by Seandroid
I'm kind of yearning for a "WSHHHHHHHHHHHYOU THINK I'M FUNNY? *stop* PSSSEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWW"
I hope you understand what I mean :P
Well it's finnished now - I did clean up the vocal parts so they stand alone more before the track bangs in.
Lots of changes made to this finnished version.
One thing - the electro drums in break 2 we think should be removed.
