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My collab with Kirsty Hawkshaw.... (pg. 2)
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| Mise |
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| Avatar One |
| Thanks FSP and Mise :) |
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| Evolve140 |
| I like it a lot. I think the vocals work pretty good. I like this style with female vox. Great production too. |
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| drogtech |
Hey
I really enjoyed the sample, there is potential in it, it even reminds me in some parts Hybrid productions. Keep it up! |
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| dandrum910 |
| Very nice work. The drums sound fantastic. |
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| Avatar One |
| Thanks :) If I could ever produce at Hybrid's level I would be a very very happy man! Glad you like what you hear so far :) |
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| Raphie |
Sorry, but i really like this, got all elements in there:
- trance arrangement (sorry for me this is still closer to trance than D&B)
- D&B type breakbeats (a bit too simple atm, but once arrangement is complete, i am sure we will hear more variaton
- Dubstep type wobbles, one can't do without one in a track nowadays.
So, what to do?
would suggest to work on the details, and listen to the latest "ThePerfectMix" podcast from EROS. I really think if you turn this a bit more into breakbeat and put that deep trance vibe on it, you've got a winner. LOVE the vocals (though they need more backings and FX to suck you into the unreal world)
Well done!!! |
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| Avatar One |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
Sorry, but i really like this, got all elements in there:
- trance arrangement (sorry for me this is still closer to trance than D&B)
- D&B type breakbeats (a bit too simple atm, but once arrangement is complete, i am sure we will hear more variaton
- Dubstep type wobbles, one can't do without one in a track nowadays.
So, what to do?
would suggest to work on the details, and listen to the latest "ThePerfectMix" podcast from EROS. I really think if you turn this a bit more into breakbeat and put that deep trance vibe on it, you've got a winner. LOVE the vocals (though they need more backings and FX to suck you into the unreal world)
Well done!!! |
Hey Raphie,
Thanks for giving the track a listen and for your thoughts. It's interesting that you think this is closer to a trance arrangement than D&B. I'm definitely looking for the 'liquid' D&B vibe, rather than the more traditional harder D&B sound...
I'll give that podcast a listen too!
I intend to vary the drums some more, and I've got some ideas for extra FX on the vox, although I don't want to tinker with them too much. Thanks again for your time!
Mike :) |
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| Evolve140 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
Sorry, but i really like this, got all elements in there:
- trance arrangement (sorry for me this is still closer to trance than D&B)
- D&B type breakbeats (a bit too simple atm, but once arrangement is complete, i am sure we will hear more variaton
- Dubstep type wobbles, one can't do without one in a track nowadays.
So, what to do?
would suggest to work on the details, and listen to the latest "ThePerfectMix" podcast from EROS. I really think if you turn this a bit more into breakbeat and put that deep trance vibe on it, you've got a winner. LOVE the vocals (though they need more backings and FX to suck you into the unreal world)
Well done!!! |
nice feedback :) |
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| Evolve140 |
The gate on the perc sounds tight and nice. I think if you made another song with a purported effort, like a satire, you could make some serious moves in the dance music industry. Keep going. And I know you smoke weed so keep packing those bowls up dude :)
Edit: the groove and percussion and style is a lot more innovative than what you are mocking, because this track is actually pretty good. I would suggest slightly layering the synths because I can tell it's a Vanguard, but it does sound nice! |
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| Avatar One |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
The gate on the perc sounds tight and nice. I think if you made another song with a purported effort, like a satire, you could make some serious moves in the dance music industry. Keep going. And I know you smoke weed so keep packing those bowls up dude :)
Edit: the groove and percussion and style is a lot more innovative than what you are mocking, because this track is actually pretty good. I would suggest slightly layering the synths because I can tell it's a Vanguard, but it does sound nice! |
Hey,
This is one of the most confusing pieces of feedback I've ever received...lol. Was it meant for this thread?
P.S. I don't smoke weed, there's no gate on the percs, and Vanguard appears nowhere in this track, in fact I don't even own Vanguard!
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