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critique this amateur track
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| rubez |
so i had a little play around with FL and this is what i came up with.
i have made one or two short tracks like this in the past. this is what i always come up with - an intro and bassline drop, basically.
i am looking for more experienced producers to critique this - on what is there, what is not, and where to go next.
using FL stutio stock sounds and a little bit of rob papen blue II.
it is just a one minutes thing, cheers :toothless
https://soundcloud.com/rubez-2/fl-1 |
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| TranceElevation |
Since nobody replies you, I will be the one to tell you the truth.
You're 5 years away from a decent track. |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceElevation
You're 5 years away from a decent track. |
How did you calculate that? |
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| TranceElevation |
| I'm a visioner. |
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| djnitride |
| Post your track to the WIP thread thats what it is there for ;) |
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| Innocence Lost |
| Maybe if you post it in the right section you'll get the right criticism. |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by rubez
useless! |
Quite honestly, there's nothing to critique. It's just a beat and very little else.
It's not bad, it's not good, it just... is. |
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| rubez |
you're just being lazy/incompetent.
the bass needs limited/compressed/sidechained or something. it is clearly too much. the delayed hat could be a little less obviously delayed in the mix. so there is those two things you missed.
and since you say there is little there, you could have elaborated on what it sorely lacks - and what should follow, since i asked for that specifically... for direction.
the WIP thread just seems to be everyone blowing smoke up each others arses.
i wouldn't call this a work in progress. that implies i am going to finish it. this is more like a general brain storming fart! |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by rubez
you're just being lazy/incompetent. |
Well, if you don't want to use the thread these sort of things are intended for, that's the best you're going to get.
| quote: | Originally posted by rubez
the bass needs limited/compressed/sidechained or something. it is clearly too much. the delayed hat could be a little less obviously delayed in the mix. so there is those two things you missed. |
What do you need anyone here for if you already know that?
| quote: | Originally posted by rubez
and since you say there is little there, you could have elaborated on what it sorely lacks - and what should follow, since i asked for that specifically... for direction. |
If you expect others to write your tracks for you, you need a different hobby. Or a ghost producer.
| quote: | Originally posted by rubez
i wouldn't call this a work in progress. that implies i am going to finish it. this is more like a general brain storming fart! |
What the are you looking for then? Why should we care about your brain storming farts? Come back when you've actually got something you intend to finish, until then you can keep on whining. |
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| rubez |
such an eloquent and elaborate dissection of my post - shame you couldn't be arsed to do that with my one-minute track.
what a cock.
i think i'll listen to one of your tracks and see how well it fares... :stongue: |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by rubez
such an eloquent and elaborate dissection of my post - shame you couldn't be arsed to do that with my one-minute track. |
It really is a shame, isn't it?
| quote: | Originally posted by rubez
what a cock. |
It's massive, I know.
| quote: | Originally posted by rubez
i think i'll listen to one of your tracks and see how well it fares... :stongue: |
It'll be available through Beatport in a few weeks :) |
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