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Originally posted by djsnazzy ok here is my interpertation of the classic trance hit THEME FROM A CLOCKWORK ORANGE by Cygnus X . I redid everything myself without useing any midi files of the track are anything just listened over and over to the song and made out the notes that way it took the best part of 3 hours to finish the intire track . please give me some feedback thanks alot lads . Cyguns X - Theme From A Clockwork Orange (Dj Snazzy Remix 2005)

Im a huge fan of Cygnus X, so ill give this a go:

The new FX used are weird, though they do fit in with the track. Your selection of Bass Drum is also bizaar. I would consider revising it.

0.55 The track starts up suddenly. Caught me off guard lol.

1.55 funky. Brings back good memories.

This interpretation is very well done. The bass is very full & warm. May be even over-full lol; if you can ever get that. The old original version had a more high-breathing feel to it. You may want to consider adding some more higher elements to this version?

4.35 I hear a nice high rhythm in the background, though it is overpowered by the bass. ....Nice phasing bass.

Great work Dj Snazzy.
Xeno.

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i would concur that a better selection of kick drum would benefit this track, all in all a great piece tho. i thouroghly enjoyed it

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thanks alot lads . im only new to producing and this music anyway only been into this music over a year and producing since christmas but i havent alot of time because ive stuped school . il redo the kick to i dont like it at the start myself thanks lads

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Originally posted by djsnazzy thanks alot lads . im only new to producing and this music anyway only been into this music over a year and producing since christmas but i havent alot of time because ive stuped school . il redo the kick to i dont like it at the start myself thanks lads

keep it up DJsnazzy. I look forward to your updated masterpeice

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here is my second attempt at it changed a few things let me know what ye think of this one thanks Cygnus X - Theme From A clockwork Orange (Dj Snazzy REmix 2005) Second Virsion

Not a huge fan of this remix. I like some of the elements of the track. The squeaky fx and stuff are kinda cool and even though the bass drum is completely flat, it has a sort of G&D acoustic feel to it which is sort of interesting.

But overall I think the synths feel very weak and fairly unimpressive. If your going to spend more time on this track, I would definately try and get them sounding a bit fatter.

You've got a fairly clean sound though which is commendable =)

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Yep it's the orange theme allright

I have to remix this too, once!

The kick and the bass in this one really interfere, you need to work on the eq-ing. Kick needs more power. Hats aren't really distinguishable too. Are they even there..? Cut some low from them and a tad more volume. Fx are nice and so is the clock tick every second bar.

Brings up good memmories.. but a bit disappointed 'bout the quality.

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thanks lads il give it another go again . what is ment by the bass is flat ? as i said again im still only new to this stuff and im only 15 aswell havent had a whole lot of musical experence as i could say thanks for the comments tho

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Originally posted by djsnazzy what is ment by the bass is flat ? as i said again im still only new to this stuff and im only 15 aswell havent had a whole lot of musical experence as i could say thanks for the comments tho

As in the the bass drum or the kick drum... or whatever you want to call it =)

The kick should have the lower end of the frequency anywhere between 50 to 150 hz, which yours has aswell as a 'click' in the higher end of the frequency. The click is what usually gives the kick its character and should be able to cut through the mix even when its all going at full tilt. This part can go as high as 3000 hz but usually rolls off pretty quick.

Hope that helps

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