listenning.
I like the bongos in the beginning.
The break is cool with this guitar sound.
It's a little bit too slow for me.
And I miss a big melody. This is not the same style as mine.
It's well produced, I think a lot of people will love it here.

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good track, i like the melody. it's a tad repetitive, though.. i suggest you add some more fx here and there.

i can tell you're improving

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Nice track, starts picking up after 4:00 nicely but I think some of the sounds clash around 8:00 but I am a total noob to producing so I could be wrong. Thanks for sharing

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Hi Omer!

This is quite a good track I think, I see you're improving quite a bit. Mastering is pretty fine, good drive to it. Bassline and percussion are good as well. I like the guitar sound.

I personlly think the track is a tad too long or feels a bit too long... But that's really nitpicking

Good job!

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hi, I listened to this the other night.. didnt have the time to write.. well.. i kinda like this track the first time u showed me.. Like the bass and the bongos, sounds really oldschool, like it.. i see ur improving a lot in the sound, and production quality.. those sweeps are really cool.. the hats arriving at 1:50, gotta love them.. sounds much phatter then i heard from u before.. i like the fact u wait over 3 minutes to enter the break.. those guitarish sounds, sounds very good.. pads as well.. those additional flute alike sounds in after 4:00 sounds awesome.. u manage to punch the track in pretty well as well.. although i think the track is a bit too long though..

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Hi Drow,

I like this song - its chilled, but still has drive.

I like the short break near the 6 minute mark where its just kick and that cool synth. I'd love to hear more off that, especially when the bass kicks back in - that groove right there rocks!! Best part of the song IMO.

Thanks for sharing,
Trevor

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Hi man, the review's here as promised

Bongos at the start are nice. Try to put less reverb on them, especially on the lower ones.
Bass is pretty flat. Personally Im not to fond of the sound.
Hat sounds nice, maybe take the volume down of the big open hat (once per 4 counts) a bit.
Break now. Nice bell there.
Ah there's the Vanguard lead. I think you can take better leads of this kind out of the Superwave..
Nice flow and structure. What I'm missing is some good fx to introduce changes and keep it alive a bit more.

Overall you've put a lot of time in this, good effort. Keep up!

-Jay

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Hello ppl,
No need to give me credit the only thing i did was the guitar and its sound, and some backround melodis;

Not very good sound in this track omer, needs impruvment...
its too long I think...

keep it up boy,
maybe someday u will learn smt

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