Hello,

I'm new on this forum. So I'll introduce myself. My name is David Pluym, almost 17 years old. I love producing music.

I wanted Hear you my newest song,

Dream Voyager

- Made with the acces virus classic.
- Many vst plugins
- Made in one week, i think.
- 11.56 mb
- 8.02 min.

I'll review your songs to.

hehe welcome dave

Edit:
recommand to check this one out guys, this guy is pretty good and a good reviewer at clubcharts.

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Last edited by Massive84 on Jun-28-2004 at 22:52

Hi Dave

Welcome to TA! Enjoy your stay, be sure to read our rules .

Anyway the topic:

The tune sounds really nice, the melodys and the general atmosphere is awesome. The bass has a delay if im not wrong - better take it off and layer it? Its abit thin and too simple for my taste. The melody, well its not bad its just not my taste. The bass progression is very cool. Thats all, except the bass evrything sounds great .

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Dream Voyager:
That high (sine?) riddle beginning at 0:40 is so lovely. The bassline sounds a little flat, dunno, I don't 100% like the sound. Just too many highs in it I guess. When the rest takes over the mid and high and you hear only bass actually, it's good
Buildup is well done. At the break a nice rest, great pads. The melody is well brought mate, goosebump stuff!
Ok here's the saw-ish synth. Why not continue with the melody which just came up? There it is again at 5:06. All sounding nice and full.

Beautiful track m8!

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hey Dave
welcome to TA!

ok here is my oppinion:
I like the melody
don't like the bass, as jay m said it sounds a little flat
pads and that lead in the breakdown sounds great!
saw-ish synth sounds a bit amature to me.
nice sine sound
perc sounds a bit too soft

anyway, good job you have done!

renco

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