Well, my latest production. Was supposed to play this out yesterday night but the cd-players in the club were like from the eighties so that didn't happen Dunno what the style is, it started out as a technotrack but I don't think you can define the result as techno... I'm pretty happy with the result, but it's always nice to hear what other people think about it This will go out on my technodemo next week to a couple of record-labels, so if there's something that needs to be fixed with it, plz tell me so

Here's the track:

Smekbar - Fluorescent 05:34min 192kbps (save as...)

comments are highly appreciated..

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Last edited by Smekbar on May-16-2004 at 16:37

can't download it :/

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Daniel

right-click, save target as... then it should be working...

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I know I shouldn't bump but I'd really like some critique on this track, so if you've got some spare time, feel free to listen... Doesn't need to be extensive critique, just tell me what you like and dislike about it...

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Still doesn't download, sorry man.

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He he! Love that bass. The lead doesn’t sound at all right, it’s the modulation that’s doing it I think. The computery synth is ace! Really like that. I think you should take the elements here and go back to making that a 100% techno tune, has the potential to be a good one. Once again though, that’s some funky bass there!!!

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Originally posted by Smekbar I know I shouldn't bump but I'd really like some critique on this track, so if you've got some spare time, feel free to listen... Doesn't need to be extensive critique, just tell me what you like and dislike about it...

still can't download it

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Daniel

that thing at the start is disorted and a bit annoying. Percs are cool, the bass is fair, it needs alot more high though. The build up synths are wierd, they sound rather cool, but its a taste thing here, not my style. Its all a bit repetetive for, not huge break nething, and that annoying noise dosent stop

Any who its average!

Alex

hi!

really good work. this track is superb!
driving bass and beats. AWESOME distorted synth that i really liked, hehe.

i'd try adding some layers of pads (atmospherical thingy's) if i were you. worth a try. at least during the build up until 02:45.

otherwise, tokgött! excellent stuff

thnx alot guys
It's great to get such good feedback and it's good to hear that you like the track I probably won't change anything in the song cos I'm quite satisfied with it as it is but I'll think about your critique in my upcoming techno-productions

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Producer & Deejay :: http://www.smekbar.se

Upcoming release on GAD012 // Patrik Skoog, Crazy X-Ray vs. Michael Paul, Chris Binder, Smekbar // Sept 2005 http://www.giantanddwarf.com