I think this track is awesome. My kinda style. One thing that bothered me was that background noise that came in every once in a while. I say lay off a lil bit on that.
Hard to critique it fully tho with a low quality file.
Good Job tho.

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thanx a lot elipse
ill check out that sound u said

anymore?

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Any chance at getting a higher encoded file?

Hey there Gingi,

Nice track so far.

As I listen:

Not sure I agree with Elipse %100 percent on the background noise although it doesn't sound good the first time you hear it.
Percussion sounds a little low in the mix you may want to increase the volume and also make it a little richer as it's very weak at the moment. Hi Hats both open and closed, really give it some so that you almost get a sub melody just there.
Possibly use another kick sound too or at least put some compression on the one you have.
Very nice break, with some intersting chord changes.

I can hear the potential in this track as I really like the way it kicks in for real at 3:59 but again it's the percussion that let's it down.
The overall mastering of the track also needs a little work in terms of levels and EQ.

Some nice waves of emotion going so I think the concept is really good.
Certain parts of the song also give that unfinished feel.
But keep at it because it definately deserves your time.

Good Job mate!!

Cheers
Nem

PS
Most of the 'name' guys will usually start responding if they see you giving something in terms of opinions and feedback on their stuff, not sure if you do that? (Due to own crap memory )

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Originally posted by Nemesis44 PS Most of the 'name' guys will usually start responding if they see you giving something in terms of opinions and feedback on their stuff, not sure if you do that? (Due to own crap memory )

hehe k thanx
ill work on my part too

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o and heres the 192 qualioty rip
enjoy
http://dj-gingi.artists.mpfspromoti..._Of_Sunrise.mp3
maybe u can hear things clearer now and tell me what to fix

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Dl-ing the 192, let's give it a review.

Btw, I think reviewing is something everybody (who'd like to improve their own production) should do, you can learn a lot from reviewing other amateur work: if you can identify good or bad things in a song, it should be easier for you to leave the bad ones out and put good sounds in your own music. And you help out other producers. So give as many (useful) reviews as you can. It's about giving and then receiving reviews here, i think

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This tambourine percussion is too loud i think, grabs my first attention.
You use an effect, sort of laser beam, which deserves some attention too, sounds too flat. Maybe some delay or reverb can help (but my own sounds are sometimes too reverb'ish, so...)

Kinda funny, i thought i heard a bassline off key and far too loud in this song... but it was still there when I pressed Winamp's stop button... Seems my neighbour above me is playing TOO fucking loud, going to tear down his installation...

Anyways I think there's potential in this one, I like this lead sound in combination with the piano (normally I'd spit on piano's, but this is good!). Filtering gives it a good sound in my opinion, nice work. I like the chords, they're not as simple and shortcut as in many other trance-productions.

Give it some more attention, and listen to Nemesis, he gives more professional reviews and highlighted the things that need improvement and I agree . Very nice work done so far, tho!

And for now, you might want to review
some of my stuff here

Cheers

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